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Ok, I just did another comment thingy, this time for Minty.
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By the way: Is it just me or the story is about the nasties trying to turn Arthur in some avatar/passageway to abominations from the other side?
By the way2: I like Minty's blog better, because it's more like real life,with small dark interventions. Athur's is getting too lovecraftian too fast, I think - perhaps that's unavoidable because he's the first one to go into the madness, and when Minty's turn comes, her blog's pacing will change too...
By the way3: I know it's a bit too eearly for this, but I think I figured out an interesting way to end Athur's entries:
Say that the nasties (they're foreigners, of course, from distant parts of Asia and Eastern Europe) capture Arthur, do whatever they want with him, he disappears, THEN they get access to his blog, which was hinting to their activities, and WRITE the final entry, saying stuff like "everything is okay, I was just needing some rest, all that crazy stuff I written seems all stupid to me now etc". The twist, as you've noticed, is - they make some innocent grammar mistakes, and they use a different style, so that the perspicatious reader will know that something is really wrong, and that it's not Arthur writing. Minty would get upset, saying stuff like "It's not him!" etc...
Got a little bit carried away here. Which is usually a good sign  |
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