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This Sunday
02:03 / 30.11.07
I would very much like it if somebody invented kitchen items that worked by telepathic command. And then gifted me some.

Because there's coffee and a variety of teas, sodas and alcoholic beverages just over in the kitchen and I'm so damned lazy I'd almost rather sit here thirsting than get up and preps something. Because the moment I get in there for coffee or whatever, I'll have to cook something solid, too, and then I'll have to put it on a plate and get some utensils and... so so so lazy. Telepathy-food-processor please!
 
 
Papess
02:06 / 30.11.07
Good plan! Deca, call GE.
 
 
Saint Keggers
02:13 / 30.11.07
Damn CE havent you trained the lady bugs to fetch your coffee yet?
 
 
Hallo, Paper Spaceboy
02:16 / 30.11.07
Arrrr!

Other than the Vonnegut-binging and general horror of modern life, I'm okay. Settling in to do some writing work tonight, I think. I punched out eight hundred words last night and I have plans to get myself churning more out tonight.
 
 
This Sunday
02:16 / 30.11.07
Since they probably already have the technologies and just aren't sharing them with the likes of me, I just thought the suggestion to them really hard. Then I made myself a cup of minty tea and put some leftover stew on the range.

I'm supposed to go help somebody celebrate their b-day tonight, but I think they're intended to do somewhere that primarily serves liquids.
 
 
This Sunday
02:22 / 30.11.07
What's the new writing like, Papers?

Did the hotel detective story ever wrap up? (How horrible am I? Needle, question, needle.)

I'm redoing the last act of the thing I mentioned last night, just to tighten and smooth. Because nobody's got anything to do with it, but me, right now so I can do all the fixing and adjusting I want. And, somehow, I have accepted a bet and am writing the sort of thing Walter Hill should do before he retires: a script introducing no moral dilemma that cannot be solved by kissing or shooting someone, and in either case will involve an exploding bridge or a scene where somebody leaves out a window..

It's less embarrassing to do than I would have expected.
 
 
Saint Keggers
02:23 / 30.11.07
Vonnegut rocks
I havent read any vonnegut in far too long


and whats wrong with places that serve mainly liquids?
is it because they dont serve droids?
 
 
Hallo, Paper Spaceboy
02:24 / 30.11.07
The hotel detective is trapped in oblivion, but I jettisoned Templechurch off and she's one of the charactes in this new thing. It's good so far, lot of energy to it, although I'm keeping my plans deliberately very loose so it can actually grow organically for a while before I decide what it's going to be.
 
 
Saint Keggers
02:24 / 30.11.07
Can I read it when you're done? It sounds great.
 
 
Hallo, Paper Spaceboy
02:26 / 30.11.07
In the middle of Slapstick, read God Bless You, Mr. Rosewater on Monday (my GOD, what a good book), and when I'm done the current one I've got Timequake to fire through. I don't know why I felt like a sudden binge. It's nice, because I've only read about five of his books before now, so there's lots to delve into.
 
 
Hallo, Paper Spaceboy
02:27 / 30.11.07
Sure. I might post parts of the first scene tonight, if you want. It's very odd so far.
 
 
Saint Keggers
02:29 / 30.11.07
Insert what ever the calm, mature version of "YAY!" is here.
 
 
This Sunday
02:39 / 30.11.07
Looking forward. It'll be the 'lithy equivalent of passing the funny little cigarette with the bluegreen smoke 'round the room. ('A very palpable hit' comes to mind, oddly, but we'll ignore that.)

And, Veng, how goes the mural business?
 
 
Saint Keggers
02:40 / 30.11.07
Today was the first in what I hope will be a continuous line of "OMG I dont suck at painting!" days. I was very very pleased. My learning curve is greatly accelerating.
 
 
Hallo, Paper Spaceboy
02:42 / 30.11.07
First para:

Stumbling!—up the arse-end of Candle Street, the air unseasonably warm (why?) as sirens blare and lonesome neighbourhood dogs yap back and forth across the empty neon haze. Templechurch lurched to a stop, pulling at the lip of her broken-heeled silver pump and slipping it off. She scraped fingernails over the blister at the back of her foot, then chucked—clunk!—the dead shoe into an open garbage bin beside the bowling alley. Shoe snapped in the middle of an ill-fated jive competition that ended with a ballroom full of men in tuxedos, sobbing. But it wasn't as though she expected to win. It was pure lark: stumbling in, demanding a vodka martini and a number to strap to the back of her party dress. She wiped at her forehead. Sweaty, not from the dancing—all that sweat dried up in the cool air, before she hit the furnace of Candle Street. Something. Burning. Something burning like her apartment building, a sight she took in as she pivoted around on her awkward feet before hopping to the side and taking off her other silver pump and throwing it away. No sense in keeping the orphan. Templechurch's apartment building was on fire.
 
 
Hallo, Paper Spaceboy
02:42 / 30.11.07
What are you doing a mural of, Veng? I think I missed that turn of events.
 
 
Saint Keggers
02:45 / 30.11.07
I like it so far! More please.

Im doing a Walt Disney themed mural for a friend's soon to be born baby's room.
 
 
This Sunday
02:53 / 30.11.07
So firm, so fully-packed... and other semi-previous, pseudo-sexualized exclamatory acclaim! Nicely done. You can definitely spin a story out of an opener like that.

You might want to consider repositioning words in 'pulling', 'lip', 'silver', 'pump' and 'slip' to get more mileage out of them, along the lines of 'Templechurch' and 'lurch' and 'stop'.
 
 
Hallo, Paper Spaceboy
03:10 / 30.11.07
More specifically?

I'll probably hit the sentence again when I'm back from my shower, before I kick off a whole new passage in this weird time tunnel I'm building out of words. VERBS! Nouns. Adjectives.

In some respects I wish time would move faster, because I have like three days to wait before this name comes down and I try something new and different. You know. Butterfly-king style.

Any pictures of mural to look at, Veng? I cans has pix?
 
 
Saint Keggers
03:16 / 30.11.07
No..very few people have seen it and very few will ever seepics of it. It still looks like a load of crap, but it is getting better.
 
 
This Sunday
03:20 / 30.11.07
I like the interjections and em-dashes. Is that settling into trope-hood? 'Cause I'd like it to.
 
 
Saint Keggers
03:23 / 30.11.07
trope-hood?
 
 
This Sunday
03:31 / 30.11.07
State of trope-ness?
 
 
Saint Keggers
03:32 / 30.11.07
what does trope mean is what I want to know.
 
 
Saint Keggers
03:38 / 30.11.07
actual title of news article: Late Shift Work Is Linked to Cancer

We are all dead. So very very dead. Although we may be safe as I dont consider this work
 
 
Hallo, Paper Spaceboy
03:40 / 30.11.07
A trope is an element of a particular style or genre. I love my em-dashes and interjections, so they'd tend to be tropes of my writing style.

I think I'm going to make some tea.
 
 
This Sunday
03:45 / 30.11.07
Typically rhetorical specialized use of a term or literary styling (like the em-dashy moments in the para above) that establish a new meaning implicit to the text, via repetition and consistent usage.

See, V, this is what's wrong with me going to an establishment primarily dealing in liquids. I get like this, when drinking... okeh, I get worse than the typical version of this, while drinking.

I mean I just wrote the phrase 'granoblastic glory' into a letter of rec for someone! Which may have to be adjusted before they attempt to use the letter to parlay an occupation.
 
 
This Sunday
03:46 / 30.11.07
Maybe the next lateshift should be called 'Not the Lateshift,' then? To trick ye olde cancers and save us all.
 
 
Hallo, Paper Spaceboy
03:51 / 30.11.07
Why don't you start the next Lateshift? We're nearly the end of this one's reasonable existence. The Page Nine Rule must be adhered to.
 
 
Hallo, Paper Spaceboy
03:54 / 30.11.07
Mmmn. Homemade iced raspberry tea.
 
 
This Sunday
03:56 / 30.11.07
Right, then. We got a new one now. I don't even know what it's about. (But I'll see him in anything, so I'll stand in... I'll stop singing now.)
 
  

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