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Tsuga - I don't have your vim, vigour or valour, and the form of the villanelle was vexing me. It wasn't so much the constraints of meter but the fact that I couldn't phrase what I wanted to phrase within the vicarious constraints, and the fact I was trying to be vivacious.

So there.
I do applaud your off-the-cuff number, though, even though I stick my tongue out and waggle it at you insouciantly.
Lula - thank you, perfect, I'll take the second option. |
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