A few of us have posted and I've started reading but now, what kind of feedback to we want? Some thoughts.....
1. Say what you liked best, in a sentence or two.
2. Say what you liked least, in a sentence or two.
3. Respond to requests by the writer, like yorick asking how to link in his ending.
4. Don't say vague stuff like "it doesn't work for me".
5. Don't criticise style. <trite>it's about helping you write what you want to, not making you write what I want to.</trite>
6. Don't bother with line by line sub-editting.
Also, is everybody going to read and comment on everybody else's? That'll mean reading ten or eleven stories, which I suppose is OK with the fortnightly schedule. |