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I too got a whiff of sexism from the movie... I agree that Portman did the best she could with the role she was given, but her character seemed written by an "outsider" - ie, to the writer she's "a girl" primarily and a human being secondarily.
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It seemed a bit unbelievable to me that someone would instantly be best buddies with a person they hadn't seen for 9 years, but even if I accept that, the subplot with the best friend made no sense. All signs point to Andrew's visit being a few days long, right? So, on day one the BF meets up with his great buddy Andrew, and minutes later robs his mother's grave. Then we're supposed to believe that in the space of a day or two he has such a massive change of heart as to go to the lengths he goes to to get the necklace back. But despite the fireside scene, there's nothing written into the plot or character to evidence that change of heart. That's bad writing.
I talked about this movie with my boyfriend for a little while afterward in an effort to get at why it bothered me so much. I think my bf gave a pretty apt summary - it's as though Braff, over the years, had come up with all these Cool Ideas for Things to Put in a Movie Someday... A hamster maze that climbs up the wall! That's cool, I'll put that in a movie.... A guy who paralyzes his own mom! That's fucked up and cool, I'll put that in a movie someday.... A quarry that's this huge abyss, what a Cool Movie Metaphor, I'll use that someday - and then when he got the opportunity to make a movie, he threw in all his Cool Ideas without much thoughtful consideration of how or why they were relevant to this particular film. It's a personal pet peeve of mine, actually - I'm so sick of films that include details whose only merit is "coolness" - Cool is empty, it's not content, not meaning.
I don't know, perhaps I'm being too harsh... but I studied art and writing for my degree, and Garden State smacked of all the classic, green writing mistakes that most people learn to recognize and correct after just one year of writing workshop. I think Braff has potential, but he needs a mentor or a wise script editor or something. |
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