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Dan Clowes vs Alan Moore

 
  

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houdini
15:01 / 18.08.03

Flux: Moore may be better than most comic book writers, but I think that Clowes is a far better writer, and gains quite a bit of ground by virtue of the fact that he is a master of comics illustration in addition to being an incredibly skilled author.

I'm interested by this statement, but I want to avoid thread-rotting the Ultimates-bashing. So I thought I'd bring this over here and see what people think.

I certainly think Clowes is a *good* writer - Pussey! was quite fun, Ghost World was properly haunting (much better than the movie), some of the stuff in Twentieth Century Eightball is pretty interesting. And I really liked the all-colour Eightball # ... 28? ... which I bought because I saw it recommended on this board.

But.

(Well, you knew that was coming.)

I really don't think that Clowes is as good a writer as Alan Moore. Certainly, Moore's choice (or happenstance) of working with superheroes may have limited some of his works. But I see two areas in which Moore vastly excels Clowes' skills:

Firstly, I think Moore has a much broader range of topics which he addresses in his work. He can write seriously about humanism, magic (with or without gratuitous extra "k"), environmentalism, technological progress, urban development, heaven & hell, redemption, love stories, horror, science fiction, thrillers, game theory, murder, detective fiction and so on and on. By contrast, Clowes has concentrated himself in the zone of American Ennui and looked extensively at disatisfaction with our culture, at self-loathing and loathing for one's fellow man, at the disatisfaction with both intellectuals and pseudo-intellectuals. I'm not saying that there's no breadth there, but I think his writing lies in a much narrower vein.

Moreover, I think that Clowes' writing, while fun, is terminally juvenile. Scott McCloud made a good point in either 'Understanding...' or 'Reinventing Comics' by saying that "indy" comics creators in the 1980's mainly reacted against the status quo. (He was mainly talking about the presence of superhero tropes in works such as 'The Maximortal' or 'Teenaged Mutant Ninja Turtles', but I intend to pervert his point for my purposes.) I see Clowes' work as reactionary in that sense.

All of the work in Eightball is steeped in Clowes' ennui. Some of it is very clever. But for my purposes, its ennui and its acerbic anger serve to limit its emotional content to a much narrower, shallower palette than the range of Moore's work. In this sense, 'Ghost World' is the best Clowes book that I've read precisely because he comes furthest away from those limitations and dares to attempt a genuine emotional connection with the characters, one that isn't mediated (or buffered) by cynicism and surrealism.

But even then, I think the depth of humanity that Moore has reached in his portrayal of, say, crumbling Hertfordshire in 'Big Numbers' or the death of Mary Kelly in the climax of 'From Hell' to even the weird, lucent emotionalism he deals with in his superhero works (such as the planet of plant people featured in 'Swamp Thing: Reunion') is much more honest, intriguing and rich.

For me, its the breadth of themes and the ability to write convincingly and thoughtfully about human emotions, unshielded by one's own cynicism, which makes Moore the far superior writer of the two.

Discuss.
 
 
Matthew Fluxington
15:22 / 18.08.03
Oh come on, this really isn't worthy of its own thread, is it? Apples Vs. Oranges, and all of that.

But seriously, I could smack you for calling Clowes's work 'juvenile.' Your argument is painfully flawed because yr focusing most of yr criticism on Clowes's angry phase, and his one-off strips that are collected in 20th Century Eightball and not on his fiction - you mention Ghost World and gloss over Eightball 28 (which could very well be the single best comic book ever published), but you totally neglect the Caricature short stories, David Boring, and Like A Velvet Glove Cast In Iron. I just don't think you know what yr talking about, honestly. Pretty much every word you've typed about Clowes's body of work makes it very clear to me that you don't really have a good understanding of it, and that you're being incredibly reductive about the content of his work. That's yr problem, and not mine. I'm not going to waste my time defending Clowes for you. In one of the other Clowes threads, Runce really nails it - check this post right here.
 
 
moriarty
15:24 / 18.08.03
Are these our only two choices, then?
 
 
Matthew Fluxington
15:27 / 18.08.03
Yeah. Good point. I'm glad that you mentioned that before someone comes in and offers some kind of half-assed "you're either a Moore person or a Clowes person" theory.
 
 
DaveBCooper
15:31 / 18.08.03
No argument here. Alan Moore is, I think, probably the finest writer to ever work in the comics medium, and as you rightly point out, the sheer sweep of his stuff – From Hell is to D.R. and Quinch what Eleanor Rigby is to Yellow Submarine, to make a poor analogy – is remarkable, as is the consistently high quality.

Alan’s not only better than most superhero writers, he’s better than most comic writers full stop, and even less-than-excellent work by him is usually streets ahead of the majority of other writers.

Daniel Clowes is good, but I agree that the slightly limited range of his stuff may lead to him appearing to be a bit limited in ability; ennui seems the right word to use, houdini, and whilst I’ve read and enjoyed Ghost World and Daniel Boring (that is his work too, right?) I can’t see myself wanting to read tales with that general tone and atmosphere all the time, any more than I’d want to listen to The Smiths all the time.

Hmm. Music analogies abound. Interesting. A subject for a future discourse, perhaps.
 
 
Matthew Fluxington
15:47 / 18.08.03
Actually, maybe the next Clowes book will appeal to you. It's about a hardass detective who is studying magic, and he's trying to find out what has happened to his ex-superhero dad, who has gone missing. As it turns out, it's all part of a secret Masonic conspiracy that the protagonist can only unravel by growing a beard and learning the art of astral projection. In the final act, he must enter the fictional reality which his father has been trapped in, which is based on the superhero comics of the 50s.
 
 
DaveBCooper
16:12 / 18.08.03
Seriously ? Sounds like a bit of a change of tone, might be interesting to see.

If, on the other hand, you're being sarky, I think that your comment to Houdini that "Pretty much every word you've typed about Clowes's body of work makes it very clear to me that you don't really have a good understanding of it, and that you're being incredibly reductive about the content of his work. That's yr problem, and not mine" is a bit unjust...

To be fair to Daniel C, I think that most writers would fare badly in my estimation if I had to rate them against Alan Moore. Even, say, Will Eisner, who I admire enormously. As moriarty points out, there are more than two comic writers in the world. Thankfully.
 
 
Matthew Fluxington
16:27 / 18.08.03
That's right, because Alan Moore can write everything from deconstructions of superheroes, to stories about magic, to stories about conspiracy theories, to period pieces set in England. Yes, it would be foolish for anyone to try to match that kind of creative range. And after all, range is the only true signifier of talent and quality. It's like, how can anyone argue that Primus and Mr. Bungle aren't the best bands in the world, right?
 
 
Locust No longer
16:32 / 18.08.03
Who cares?
 
 
deja_vroom
16:35 / 18.08.03
I think that most writers would fare badly in my estimation if I had to rate them against Alan Moore.

True, so true...
 
 
bigsunnydavros
16:36 / 18.08.03
This is an odd, odd topic, methinks, but since it seems to me that people are writing off some of Clowes' work a bit too harshly here, I'll have a go at contributing something.

First of all, I have to say that there are many, many people comics which I would rate above most of Alan Moore's work. This, in large, comes down to personal taste, but it's a factor here. And I think that this is important, because as moriarty notes, these aren't the only two options out there--comics is a wide field, and there's a lot more to the medium than this.

I do think the tendancy to take it as granted that Moore is superior to virtually everyone in the field is a bit odd, to be honest. He's very talented, for sure, and has produced a lot of wonderful work (I'm very, very fond of From Hell, Top 10 and V for Vendetta, for example), but I don't feel like he towers above everyone else in any way.

But anyways, this is a thread about Moore and Clowes, so I'll try and stay on topic from now on...

Right--to be honest, I find comparing them very hard because they're "such different talents". It's true that Moore's work has engaged with a wider variety of genres than Clowes' has, but a lot of this comes down to the fact that they work in very different ways.

On a really basic level, I think you could argue that Clowes' work is "narrower" than Moore's, but this alone wouldn't necesserily mean that Moore was better. The actual quality of the writing could count for a lot. Even so... I'd say that Clowes covers a lot of ground in his comics. More than he's getting credit for here, at the very least.

Eightball #22 is, in my opinion, the most formally complex comic book I've ever read--it tackles a variety of genre's and styles in its 37 pages in a way that is both self-aware & intelligent, and also engenders a lot of sympathy for its large cast of complex (and very different) characters.

There's a lot going on technically and structurally too--threads going through the various stories; the manner in which the stories are arranged and paced (truly masterfully, in my opinion--somehow simple and effective despite the fact that Clowes'is juggling so much stuff); the differing narrative and artistic styles; the visual tricks, like the times Clowes pushes half of a speech bubble outside the panel etc...

It's funny as all hell too, but that's by the by at this point.

And it's not just Eightball #22 that's complex and rewarding.

Ghost World and the best stories in the Caricature collection deal with a wide variety of characters, situations and emotions in a very complicated and (yes) emotionally engaging way, and to dismiss them as narrow and juvenile seems to me to miss so much.

This is very textured stuff, and I get a hell of a lot out of it so... whatever. This is probably a lot to do with personal taste, but I do prefer it to anything Moore has ever written.

I'm not dissing Moore here--he's a smart man, and a great writer who plays well off of various styles and genres and who is very good at creating intelligent plots, worlds and characters. He's good at tying together a lot of complex information, and he's a hell of a storyteller to boot, but as I've already said, I don't think he is indesputibly superior to the everyone else... his work is certainly not so good that it leaves little room for discussion, is it?
 
 
bigsunnydavros
16:40 / 18.08.03
Sorry about the general sloppiness of the above post--it was written in a hurry, and is thus a little clunky.
 
 
Matthew Fluxington
16:47 / 18.08.03
I think that the Alan Moore Is The Best Writer In Comics Ever syndrome is kind of similar to The Godfather Is The Best Movie Ever, The Beatles Were The Best Band Ever, The Sixties Were The Best Decade, Kurt Cobain Saved Rock And Roll, and Biggie Was The Best MC Ever ideas - I think that it is an idea that is blindly accepted by a great many people, and that the idea perpetuates itself the less people actually think about it. Between that, and the fact that like Grant Morrison and Neil Gaiman, Moore has a lot of obsessive fans who deify him in strangely literal ways, I always find people who would claim that his work is superior to that of all others to be deeply suspect.

You know how there's a lot of people out there, and Queen is their favorite band, and they won't even listen to anything but Queen? They just cling to the idea that Queen is the best thing ever, and that nothing could touch the perfection of Queen, so they don't even bother? It's kinda like that.
 
 
DaveBCooper
17:14 / 18.08.03
I think that ‘the x is the best y’ syndrome Flux rightly refers to is indeed one which can lead to extremely sloppy thinking, but let’s not forget that the backlash effect can lead to equally suspect and wonky reasoning.

On the other hand, I’m far from comfortable with having my opinions rejected on the grounds that they’re part of some wider malaise. Seems to be an unnecessarily personal thing to do when we’re ostensibly discussing two creators’ bodies of work and their merits or otherwise. Unless we’re going to get into the whole thing of discussing the admirers of the work, which is a wildly different discussion, surely : is the Rocky Horror Show itself to be discussed, or the audience attending it ?

I agree that the unexamined opinion is not worth having, and I’m more than happy to talk about why I rate particular Moore work more highly than Clowes’, but if you’re just going to suggest (as I think you are in your last post) that it’s because it’s of a blind idolatry and a non-critical approach to the stuff I read, or a lack of willingness to try other stuff, that seems awfully assumptive about the nature of my bookshelves and not a little rude, no matter how strongly you feel about the subject under discussion.
 
 
The Falcon
20:32 / 18.08.03
Pretty much every word you've typed about Clowes's body of work makes it very clear to me that you don't really have a good understanding of it

Brought this out first post! Well done.
 
 
--
20:59 / 18.08.03
I think they're both good writers. Its kinda hard to compare them though as they both seem to work in very different genres. Like any writers, they have their good points and bad points.
 
 
8===>Q: alyn
00:30 / 19.08.03
"Feelings" statement: I feel someone around here is being a jackass, and it ain't me.

Clowes would totally kick Moore's ass, because Moore's a big stoner and would probably not even train for the fight or anything. He'd show up for the weigh-in eating a hoagie and everything, and Clowes would be all, "whooPAH!" and it would be a very disappointing matchup.

Next week: Dan Jurgens vs Kevin Eastman! Pretty much the same story, actually.
 
 
matsya
01:21 / 19.08.03
can i just say, flux, that reading this was a lot of fun. thanks.

is the "all colour" eightball the one about the deluded shut-in writer? i loved that. dan clowes is the master of short fiction in comic form. no question. moore's good, but sometimes far too much of a dilettante (is that how you spell it) to get it right. he kind of namedrops big ideas and that can get a bit irritating.

for mine though, i'm happy to have both of them on me bookshelf.

m.
 
 
bio k9
01:26 / 19.08.03
Can we widen the discussion and talk about the writing styles of a variety of different creators or is that a different thread? And, if that is a different thread, can we change the title of this one to "Corky"?
 
 
Matthew Fluxington
01:51 / 19.08.03
Absofuckinglutely not, Bio. Comics creators can only exist in binary opposition to one another.

I'm going to start a thread tomorrow, Mark Millar Vs. Chester Brown, and it's going to be awesome.
 
 
moriarty
02:03 / 19.08.03
Flux! Get out of my brain!

I was going to start one on Schulz vs. Herriman, then I decided that I should raise the stakes more. So it was going to be Liefeld vs. Buckler, but that didn't fit the bill. So now I'm considering Keane vs. Davis, which I think is about right. Family Circus/Garfield throwdown!
 
 
8===>Q: alyn
02:34 / 19.08.03
moore's good, but sometimes far too much of a dilettante

Zwuh!?! The man is obsessed, works very hard at what he does, and has "paid the cost to be the boss." Dilettante? My biggest problem with Moore is his fans, and I'm one of them.

Moore's a poet writing comics. Clowes is a contemporary fiction writer writing comics (I don't see where Clowes also being an illustrator really comes into it). They are both awesome, except when it comes to bare-knuckles freeforalls. Isn't that what we were talking about?
 
 
bio k9
02:45 / 19.08.03
Be quiet Corky.
 
 
matsya
03:24 / 19.08.03
I dunno, some of moore's stuff is just a little too "look at the ideas i know about" at times. Lost Girls as an example. Promethea as another. They're interesting ideas, sure, but he doesn't do too much with them.

m.
 
 
--
03:26 / 19.08.03
I dunno, if it were physical I'd place my money on Moore. I've seen pics of him and he looks insane.
 
 
Matthew Fluxington
03:38 / 19.08.03
Similarly, I feel that Clowes can be a little too "look at all of these keen, highly detailed and nuanced insights that I have into the psyches of a fairly wide range of people, particularly the sort of conflicted marginalized quasi-misanthropic folks who make up my core audience" for his own good. He should keep his complicated ideas about people and their relationships with one another to himself once in a while, and write a story about Superman or werewolves instead.
 
 
8===>Q: alyn
08:55 / 19.08.03
Sypha, he probably does have the reach on Clowes, but he looks flabby and stoned in most of the pictures I've seen, and while I've only seen one picture of Clowes, who was also kind of flabby, he has an intense, neurotic sqint that makes me think he's got the heart of a champion. Miney on Clowes, definitely.

Superman and werewolves, bareknuckles in a warehouse on Driggs Ave, and Superman gets bitten. Superman wins of course. That's what's not much fun about Superman, in fact it's why he sucks.

Come on, Flux, be serious.
 
 
Regrettable Juvenilia
09:09 / 19.08.03
This is an idiotic thread.

There is clearly no contest: Alan Moore penned Violater/Badrock, which featured not only Violater but also Badrock. Anyone who says they don't enjoy comics like that is a self-loathing self-righteous middle class ninny who's in denial.
 
 
Krug
09:16 / 19.08.03
Well I left it at the idea that Clowes can live to be two hundred and still not write something that's intellectually and emotionally more stimulating than From Hell. And The "Valerie" chapter still makes me cry.
I'm new to Clowes and am still in shock over how Ghost World ended (I saw the film when it come out and it was rubbish) and some really heartbreaking scenes in David Boring that creep out of nowhere between and under panels. Clowes could be the best man working in comics (because he like draws his own stuff) but I don't think he has the power that Moore has or that he'll ever be able to pull of the incredible detail of From Hell.
It's a retarded thread and a stupid argument, some people think Clowes is the best thing that ever happened to comics since Will Eisner and some think Moore's brilliance cannot be diluted by rubbish criticism that suggests it is a perpetuating label started by fanboys.

I'm really in love with Clowes and am going to buy Eightball and "Velvet" next along with the Moore tribute books and by having an argument like this is just absurd because I will buy almost anything with their name on it.

Moore can easily shift gears and still stun us all but Clowes might have married himself to one area of storytelling.

And now I'm bored with this.
 
 
Matthew Fluxington
13:51 / 19.08.03
You're right about the end of Ghost World film - what the hell were they thinking with that ambiguous ending that doesn't neatly tie up the loose threads of the story? The final act should have had Enid marrying Seymour, learning magic, and ending with a climactic sword duel between Enid and Becky on top of a mountain.

Even still, that doesn't change the fact that Ghost World is fundamentally flawed for its lack of conspiracies, Masons, and prostitutes.
 
 
Krug
14:12 / 19.08.03
Umm...
I was referring to the book how I was in shock about how well the book ended. The film was rubbish.
 
 
Matthew Fluxington
14:38 / 19.08.03
Right. I know, it wasn't nearly as good as the film version of From Hell.
 
 
houdini
20:24 / 19.08.03

Hmmmm.

Little context: I actually think Clowes is damn good. I put this thread here because I saw 3+ posts in a row in the Ultimates thread talking over Flux's statement and I wanted to call it into question but I didn't want to contribute to thread-rot on that thread.

Sorry if that's "idiotic".

What I then did badly was to just make a case saying, "No, Moore's better." Which really isn't the case. What is the case is that I (a) know the Moore oeuvre better and (b) like his approach to comics more. But in attempting to put a counterpoint I didn't really mean to encourage a "smackdown" mentality. Part of the joy of the internet, I guess.

I will say this: Eightball #22 was a very good comic. I think it may be unfortunate that the only other Clowes stuff available locally was/is 'Twentieth Century Eightball', which I found played strongly to the "angry period" motif. I freely admit that I haven't read 'Like A Velvet Glove...' etc. But I do have to say that *much* of what I have read doesn't really appeal to me. I think that for my money the treatment of the characters in 'Ghost World' is the only time I've felt a really strong emotional connection to Clowes's characters. I found the characters in EB22 interesting but I'm not sure that I really felt them. But this is prolly a personal reaction rather than a failing of the writing.

In summary, I retract any suggestion that Moore is "vastly superior" to Clowes. But I don't think that Clowes is vastly superior to Moore either.

Should probably just have posted that in the first place.

Sigh.
 
 
Regrettable Juvenilia
21:04 / 19.08.03
Yeah, I went and checked the original thread again and I guess it was the best thing to take that discussion into its own thread, houdini. My apologies.
 
 
at the scarwash
23:22 / 19.08.03
The idea that Clowes is a better writer simply because he draws his own work is absolute madness. Don't get me wrong--I've loved Clowes since "The Uggly Family" in Cracked magazine, and the last issue of Eightball was one of the most formally impressive works I've read in the comics medium. The idea that because one guy does one thing and the other guy does two things, the two-thing guy is better, well that's just silly. Both of these venerable sequential fellers create memorable characters and tell well-crafted, beautifully-paced stories. For my money, half of the Clowes experience is rooted in the high level of the design of his publications. On the other hand, because Moore does not illustrate his own work, he is able to draw upon a very diverse range of styles and media from the vast pool of artists rabid to work on his stuff. Moore has a very firm grasp of what goes into each panel of his comics, and I don't think that should be ignored.

Besides, clowes doesn't do performance art versions of his stuff, does he?
 
  

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