Well if I'd been organised enough to get myself a smooth website like that while still doing my Ba I'd be quite chuffed.
Good design, easy to use and attractive. I quite liked the way you displayed thumbnails as b&w details of each image and then had the main pic in colour. The motif of the girl's eyes (yours?) is good too.
The 'sketches' link on the didn't work for me, and only one of the three links on the front page worked (the 'abstract dark' one - was that all we were supposed to look at anyway?)
Second Grey Area'a point about the grammar, there are quite a few mistakes/typos in the 'about' section. To be honest i found the text a little bland, it reads too much like a list and has a "what I want to be when I grow up" air about it. You should talk more about the ideas behind your work, not just give a list of influences. Gripe over. |
