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White Teeth

 
 
Foxxy Feminist Fury
16:33 / 03.12.01
Has anyone read this book? It's absolutely amazing! Somehow manages to touch on similar points as did The Poisonwood Bible while remaining entirely hilarious. Reminds me in a way also of The Liar's Club, a book that managed to both be heartbeaking and hysterically funny at the same time.

Something in me also likes the fact that several of the characters in the book are my age, complete with flashbacks to school circa 1990, but I realize this is subjective.

Thoughts? Anyone?
 
 
sleazenation
19:17 / 03.12.01
is this white teeth as writen by Zadie smith? a book that flyboy had crush on a while back?
 
 
Twig the Wonder Kid
15:35 / 04.12.01
I'm sorry but I hated it.

It's rare that I don't force myself to get to the end of even the worst of books but the sacharine political correctness of "White Teeth" really started to grate.

It reminded me of the fictional 'Amelior' in Martin Amis's "The Information" - a book that became incredibly successful purely on the virtue that it didn't offend anyone.
 
 
Regrettable Juvenilia
15:56 / 04.12.01
Novel by brown-skinned girl in "mostly about brown-skinned people" shock!

quote:Originally posted by Twig the Wonder Kid:
It's rare that I don't force myself to get to the end of even the worst of books but the sacharine political correctness of "White Teeth" really started to grate.


Such as?

It's set in London. London = multi-cultural city. Full of all types of races, all living together and inter-mingling. Not that many novels set in London show this. Most of them just about white people. White Teeth not primarily about white people! Non-white people in White Teeth much less stereotypical than in most novels set in London! White Teeth suggests white people and non-white people can get along, perhaps even marry (without ignoring the cultural complications that may ensue)! Zadie Smith = obvious loony liberal PC nazi!

Sure, it's quite an optimistic novel for much of the way through (it's arguably got an even utopian vision in there somewhere, although it doesn't really win out in the end), but I wouldn't call it 'saccharine', and as for 'political correctness', every time I hear or read this term I have to ask the person using it to explain what the fuck it means.

Oh, hang on. You've just quoted something from a Martin Amis novel as if that nasty little shit of a man, so mired in bigotry and succesful largely due to good old fashioned nepotism, was capable of a good or clever idea. We're never gonna agree on this one, are we?

[ 04-12-2001: Message edited by: Flyboy ]
 
 
Ariadne
16:10 / 04.12.01
Hey, Flyboy, wasn't it you who commented that Jack the Bodiless posts 'they're shit!!!' (or similar) every time The Strokes are mentioned?

And then the minute Amis is mentioned.....

I quite liked White Teeth but got a bit bored half way through. It was slightly too cutesy for my taste. That said, I adore Smith. Every time I read an article or column by her I want to go and meet her, take her for a drink.

She's a cool woman, or seems that way. I know she's planning to give up writing, or at least put it on the back burner for a while but I hope she does more.
 
 
Regrettable Juvenilia
16:27 / 04.12.01
You're quite right. I *do* do that, and I'm a bad man. I'd argue that it's kind of relevant here, and I'd find the quotation from Amis about not liking 'political' readers, but it would be indulging my little bete noir (to use a highly dubious term ).

And yes, White Teeth is agreed by quite a few people I know to go off quite a lot somewhere between 1/2 and 3/4 of the way through (when she hits the modern stuff, basically... it's all a bit too obviously based on her own schooldays, to the point where someone I know knows the Jewish kid Josh (?) was based on). Once the mouse appears, it goes a bit pear-shaped.

But I'm with you on Zadie, as sleazenation 'hints'. I'd like to state that my having a crush on her is almost entirely based on her writing abilities (non-fiction as well as fiction, if not more so). I saw her read once. She's amazing, but I'll shut up about that now...
 
 
Foxxy Feminist Fury
16:35 / 04.12.01
I don't think it's too cutesy at all! Rather, the passion that Zadie Smith has for subject really shines through in her characterization. No character is left to be simply wooden. Even the ones you think may be have color and depth. I've got maybe 1/4 of the book to finish at this point and I am just in love with the characters. Well, I guess I'm not so fond of Marcus and Joyce at this point, but they may redeem themselves yet.

I absolutely loved her description of the different groups at school doing different things. While it's obvious she loves her subject matter, does this necessarily make her writing cutesy? There are some brutal moments in the book.

So someone explain their cutesy description as applied to Zadie Smith.

Merci.
 
 
Ariadne
16:40 / 04.12.01
Yeah, sorry, I was uncomfortable with the word 'cutesy' even as I wrote it.

Hmm. It's been a while since I read it so without getting it down and starting again, I'm struggling to define exactly what put me off. I really, really liked it to begin with and then it somehow just got a bit - shallow? simplistic? I just stopped feeling the characters were real to me, I think.

I remember thinking that it was like the way I write myself! Not enough depth to it, that kind of thing. Perhaps she rushed the second part?

Does that explain what I mean any better? Probably not. Maybe I'll read it again...
 
 
Kit-Cat Club
07:29 / 05.12.01
I too felt that it dropped off - probably becasue the book could have gone on and on, and the plot device of the mouse is actually nothing to do with the real point of the book, which makes it feel rather superimposed.

I think it's quite accurate about that part of London, as well. Slightly rosy, maybe, but not too much.
 
 
No star here laces
08:22 / 05.12.01
To me, the problem with this book was that she chickened out and added a plot.

The reason the book is so fantastic in its early stages is, as everyone has pointed out, because the characters are so luminously three-dimensional. One of the things I particularly loved was seeing old people written about as human beings. And it's wonderful the way it just rambles about.

I hoped it was all leading up to some nice unsatisfying ending where Millat settled down and married and Irie continued to lust after him and they all grew old. Like, you know, real life and stuff.

I think the whole construct with the mouse and the attempt to build up to a big climax ruins the book because none of its strength is in narrative structure.

But you do have to wonder what her second novel will be like - will she run out of real-life people to base her characters on?
 
 
Ganesh
19:37 / 05.12.01
For some reason, I found her writing style quite impenetrable. I'm not sure why; it just didn't flow, somehow. I'm usually a stickler for finishing books but I abandoned this one barely halfway through. Partner's got it on tape, though, and says it's fabulous; might give it a go in that format.
 
 
Murray Hamhandler
20:12 / 05.12.01
(jumping up and down and laughing and clapping like an idiot)Yes! Ha ha! I fucking -loved- this book! It totally rocked my ass stupid! The only problem w/me discussing it, though, is the whole mind-fart thing I go through every time that I try to recall a book that I read over a month ago. I remember distinctly it being one of those books where I was practically shouting, "Yes! Yes!" on every page, but I can't really remember what, exactly, I was shouting "Yes!" about. A quick post on the themes and basic outline of the plot would help me out tremendously, if those of you who have read it could indulge me...
Arthur Sudnam
 
 
Regrettable Juvenilia
06:50 / 06.12.01
I have to thank everyone in this thread, and particularly Twig, for motivating me to go back and re-read the last third of the book, which I sort of rushed and hop-skipped through first time, for reasons stated above (Lyra is quite right).

What I'd forgotten, and what tends to get overlooked when people talk about White Teeth, however positively, is that there's a quiet, intelligent but fiery anger burning away under all that witty, clever prose. Anger about things like the effects of colonialism, and (when the Chalfens are introduced) the way that the supposedly intellectual and liberal white English middle classes treat "brown strangers", as Joyce calls them: well-intentioned but condescending and misguided at best, insulting and actively unhelpful at worst. But also about general human stupidity, the kind that occurs in all races and cultures... Oh, and Zadie Smith also cares about the nasty forgotten little corners of history - did anyone else even know about the Jamaican earthquake of 1907 before reading about it here?

What's brilliant about Smith as a writer is that even when she's making the Chalfens thoroughly annoying and appalling, she also makes you see why they might appeal to Irie, and she also makes them just human and sympathetic enough (although I think they're slightly less well-drawn than, say, Samad or Archie etc...). There's also, as I mentioned, a refreshing kind of idealism to her writing... but I want to think about that a little and finish re-reading before I say any more about that.
 
 
No star here laces
08:09 / 06.12.01
See, thing I loved about the Chalfens is that when you first meet 'em they are these awful grotesque caricatures that left the middle class (and even jewish) reader like myself squirming with embarassment. But Smith warms to them as she continues to write them and a sense of their good points and the way they get over their initial response to coloured visitors to form lasting bonds comes through beautifully. I thought this dynamic was one of the most sensitively handled bits of the book - it would have been very tempting to have just taken the piss out of this stereotype the whole way through, instead of turning them into human beings.
 
 
e-n
10:02 / 06.12.01
it's weird that you found her style inpenetrable Ganesh, maybe its because I was reading it as I went on holiday , but I founf it to be the easiest book I've ever read.What I mean to say is that reading it really was a joy, I flew through it.It's hard to say why ecactly but it just was.

And I really enjoyed it.
Reading this thread makes me want to read it again.
 
 
Foxxy Feminist Fury
11:40 / 06.12.01
You make a very interesting point, Lyra. See the thing that strikes me is that, perhaps through the use of various points of view, there's no one in the book who is completely unsympathetic. There's no one in the book who doesn't have a motivation for why they act the way they do, and Smith really does a nice job of giving all the characters some depth.

Also what Flyboy says is accurate (in terms of anger, colonialism, etc): that's why I said this book reminds me of "The Poisonwood Bible," though "White Teeth" is much more light-hearted and "Poisonwood Bible" seems to have a few more layers. Both deal with this question: we know what the white people have done to the brown people, and it's too late to change that. So what do we do now?

I feel "White Teeth" is more of a living portrait in terms of the above question, whereas I think "Poisonwood Bible" actually attempts to give a few answers. And ultimately "White Teeth" is the more optimistic of the two.

Finally, I don't know if it's because of this stupid thread or what, but now I'm finding it more appealing to flip through one of my Prague tour guides rather than read the last 20 pages of this book.

Too soon to tell for me if you're right about the dropoff.
 
 
Murray Hamhandler
17:44 / 06.12.01
All right, damn it. I'm feeling the need to re-read the damn book, even though I just read it a couple of months ago. I just can't remember enough of the stuff that made me jump around the room like an idiot. And I'll take notes this time, like I thought about doing the first time. I'm such a nerd...
Arthur Sudnam
 
 
Ganesh
12:56 / 07.12.01
quote:Originally posted by e-n:
it's weird that you found her style inpenetrable Ganesh


Yeah, it is weird; I never usually have problems with books. Can't put my finger on quite why it didn't engage me but it didn't. This thread is vaguely inspiring me to try again, though.
 
 
Murray Hamhandler
09:24 / 08.12.01
And in a semi-related note, as noted in another thread, Jimmy Corrigan won the Guardian award for an author's first work, which went to Ms. Zadie Smith for White Teeth last year.
Arthur Sudnam
 
 
Haus about we all give each other a big lovely huggle?
12:01 / 11.12.01
Hooom. I thought that for the first 70-odd pages it wants to be Salman Rushdie, then gives up and spins out what is essentially the Forsyte Saga for Guardian readers.

Has its moments. Readable. Falls apart completely over the mouse, but then we all knew that, and how lazy are the lazy stereotypes of the activists? Oh, and the trabscribed accents are impossibly annoying, but that may be a personal thing.
 
 
Regrettable Juvenilia
12:11 / 11.12.01
Yeah, the lazy activist stereotyping is lazy (lazy activists? hey, that's me...).

Almost as lazy as the phrase 'Guardian readers'.
 
 
Haus about we all give each other a big lovely huggle?
07:45 / 13.12.01
Oh, you.

Oh, you.

Getting all manly and protective of tender, delicate Zadie.

Oooooh, I could just huggle you both up.

IN the meantime, however - you are quite correct, "Guardian Readers" is a generalised concept, and in this case a quite deliberately applied one, describing as it does a broad constituency of largely middle-class, largely university-educated left-leaning liberals. For whom Smith is accessible and readable because similar to them in many ways, while at the same time positioned as somebody who is not only enjoyable but *desirable* and *worthwhile* to read.

None of which changes the fact that the domino players and Sadie Zmith's mother are straight out of Desmond's.
 
 
No star here laces
08:32 / 13.12.01
And you base this on what, Haus? Your wide and varied circle of non-white friends? Scuse me for finding this slightly amusing, as you are without question the whitest man I ever met...

I think it's kind of an interesting nugget that you compare the characters to Desmonds when in fact they are not really that similar - strikes me that you are not particularly well acquainted with this sort of nuance and therefore tend to lump all black characters in literature and drama together.

Oh god is it satisfying to point out an unconscious prejudice in you.

Just a thought, likes...
 
 
Haus about we all give each other a big lovely huggle?
08:55 / 13.12.01
quote:Originally posted by Lyra Lovelaces:
And you base this on what, Haus? Your wide and varied circle of non-white friends? Scuse me for finding this slightly amusing, as you are without question the whitest man I ever met...


Certainly one of the palest.

Lyra. You are a middle-class boy par excellence. You went to Queen's College, Cambridge. You work in advertising. A large collection of hip-hop records does not make you an expert on race, and nor does liking White Teeth. I decline to get involved in an argument about which middle-class Oxbridge-educated white boy of the two of us is blacker, with, you know, more black friends and everything, and if you had an ounce of self-awareness you might have considered what an astonishingly fucking jejune proposition that is.

[ 13-12-2001: Message edited by: The Haus of a sudden chill ]
 
 
Haus about we all give each other a big lovely huggle?
08:55 / 13.12.01
On the litcrit angle - the Desmond's comparison was quite simply because sticking in a couple of elderly West Indian men playing dominoes in a pub is a standard device to evoke a very specific sense of place and space also used to good effect in that august production. I was inexact about Sadie Zmith's mother - what I menat in that case was that Smith's attempts to render patois and accent textually make my teeth hurt.
 
 
No star here laces
08:55 / 13.12.01
Clearly the "who has more black friends" argument is fuckin stupid, but I do think your comments demonstrate a sweeping disregard for nuance and a shocking lack of familiarity with a culture that really isn't that distant from you.

I find your assertion that I am 'just as bad' as you, and therefore in no position to comment deeply embarrassing for a man of your intelligence. What is this supposed to mean? Does it mean that there is such a cultural gulf between white and black that no matter how much I might associate with and experience that culture, I can never understand it? I would suggest that this is a) racist as it appears to reduce other cultures to a less than human state. b) it is foolish as it suggest that you could not possibly understand the book enough to criticise it and c) ridiculous coming from someone who has presumably spent all that time studying ancient cultures to no possible avail as they will be forever beyond his understanding.

Alternatively do you mean that there is no possibility of change and learning through experience? Yes we have a lot of background in common, but I would suggest that my life experiences have been radically different from yours so it is deeply facile to suggest that my comments arose purely because I 'have a lot of hip hop records'. But if this is what you wish to assert then I would suggest that you stop pulling people up on unconsciously sexist and/or heterocentric comments as you are presumably in no position to understand the victim's position in that case either.

Secondly, you are pulling off a neat little dodge in reducing your objection to a stylistic one when the original statement seemed to be far more about characterisation than representation. Yes, accents reproduced in print are embarrassing - Trainspotting being the example par excellence. But if that's what you'd meant to say, surely you would have just stated it - you've got a pretty good grasp of the English language.

You've admitted yourself that you have little or no involvement in this culture "I will never be street" was, I believe, the expression, so why not have the good grace to admit that you have made a slightly foolish comment due to unconscious prejudice?
 
 
Regrettable Juvenilia
08:55 / 13.12.01
quote:Originally posted by The Haus of Warm and Toasty Huggles:
Oh, you.

Oh, you.

Getting all manly and protective of tender, delicate Zadie.


I'm staying out of you and Lyra playing Amos and Andy, but I would just like to point out that I wasn't defending the author or work, but instead conceding your criticism. And having a dig, it's true, but not in a way that relates to my minor crush on Zadie Smith: I get even more defensive about Bret Easton Ellis, and I don't fancy him...
 
 
Haus about we all give each other a big lovely huggle?
10:10 / 13.12.01
Well, it looks like you've missed the point again through your eagerness to refute what you'd like the opposition argument to be, Lyra. That so rarely happens.

The point is that it is *jejune* (lat. ieiunus, empty) to stand in judgement over how successfully acculturated someone is- "familiar with this sort of nuance" - on such a naive and playground level.

What "nuance" would that be? The non-white nuance? The non-white character in a book nuance? The non-white character in a book written by a non-white person nuance? Nuancepatrolgo? What the hell are you talking about? And what does being "street" have to do with it? Is Sadie Zmith "street"? I rather thought that she was bookish....hey, I'm bookish, too. My experience of the nuances of bookishness clearly make me far better able to appreciate her character nuances than "street" you.

Your arguments are utterly incoherent. I think it's very kind of you to admit that "who has the most black friends" - your argument (and I quote - "And you base this on what, Haus? Your wide and varied circle of non-white friends?" The implication being that this supposed dearth compared to your plethora of real black people! With dark skin and everything! Like what I've got! Look at my cultural capital! Worship it! holed my validity as a commentator below the waterline from the start) - is a fucking stupid one. Let's now look at:

strikes me that you are not particularly well acquainted with this sort of nuance and therefore tend to lump all black characters in literature and drama together

Yes. That's me. Black characters in Clock Without Hands. Black characters in Go Tell it on the Mountain. Black characters in Beloved. Black characters in the Invisible Man and Absolute Beginners. Rochester's wife. Memnon in the Aethiopis. I see them all as, essentially, the same character. As contentions go, that actually makes the term "incomprehensibly morontastic" shuffle its feet awkwardly and try to make eye contact with another partygoer. I can't believe that I am actually even attempting to respond to this argument in any means other than slow and very explicatory hand motions asking if it would like to be wheeled into the sunlight.

Desmond's seemed a perfectly appropriate cross-medium comparison, as it too had a tendency to rely on lazy tropes - in this case, the domino-playing senescents and the eye-gouging representations of the accents, just as in times of panic Desmond's had a nasty habit of falling back on Porkpie saying "yah, man" for no immediately discernable reason, or Desmond throwing an ineffectual hissy fit in the face of his immovable wife - rather than any sort of nuance. For other comparisons across media, you may want to look at David Lodge's book and subsequent adaptation of television of "Nice Work", where the tropes of the nineteenth-century industrial romance were modulated into the tropes of the historical television drama. You know, he's white, but he's a structuralist, and they're pretty tough cookies in a rumble.

Oh, stuff it. Much as I love you, Lyra, there is simply no point in trying to reason with you, especially not when I am angry., And especially not when you have drawn such a quaintly spiralling set of conclusions from a quite simply nonexistent premise.

I'm very glad that you are "down" with the "street", but I don't think it makes you a more nuanced reader of necessity. Since you seem incapable of picking up the actual words, much less the nuances, of a post on Barbelith, I'm afraid it may be a while before I renew my subscription to the Lyra Lovelaces Literary Review.

[ 13-12-2001: Message edited by: The Haus of a sudden chill ]
 
 
Loomis
08:56 / 21.04.05
Oooh, what a delicious spat between Haus and Laces. I can't believe I missed it!

Well it's taken a number of years for my envious rage at Zadie Smith's snagging of a huge advance for her first novel to die down, and I've finally read the book. I thought it was excellent. Not perfect, for reasons given above, but then so many other books that get this sort of media attention have so many more faults, so a spot of lazy characterisation here and there and a little plot-forcing weren't enough to detract from the generally excellent characterisation and believable motivations and actions.

I didn't feel that it dropped off noticeably in the second half. I think most of the mouse stuff was fine; it was only when that became the focus and Smith felt compelled to involve every character from the entire book (even the French doctor!) in a neat ending that it really jarred. And some of the language in the second half was a little too self-consciously trying to make grand statements. E.g. some of that over-written guff about Irie's pregnancy being some sort of symbol of something or other because of not being able to determine the father. In fact even the scenes where she shagged the brothers was totally unnecessary and could have just been left out.

Also the school stuff was very fresh to me since I went to school in Australia, thus my knowledge of school life in England is limited to Adrian Mole.

Having said that, I don't think the plot was shoe-horned in too aggressively. I’m not a great fan of overly plot-driven novels and I really hate it when a good novel gets taken over by the author’s need to wrap it up neatly, but to be honest I was enjoying this book so much that it didn’t really bother me. The enjoyable features of the first half were still there and the mouse thing had been building up for a while so it didn’t jar too much. Plus the book is in many ways a soap opera anyway (albeit written with plenty of skill and nuance) so the plot device wasn’t so out of kilter with the book’s style. As I said, far worse crimes have been committed by supposedly far better writers. Personally I think Salman Rushdie writes over-rated horseshit, so give me White Teeth over Midnight’s Children any day.

And was I the only one who pictured Marcus as Artie Zith from the Simpsons?
 
 
snowgoon
11:55 / 26.04.05
Been an age since I read this, but I remember enjoying it in an amiable kind of way. It may just have matched the pacing I required at the time but I do recall it plodding along quite nicely, never feeling too hurried or too slow.

Character development is good, and never overpressed, and I really liked the way she handled the aggressive undertones of the main theme (christ, I sound like some crap book reviewer.. ohhh hang on, I AM!).

Not a book I'd recommend to everyone but it was enjoyable, although not as enjoyable as the two having a (lovers?) tiff above. THAT was fun.
 
  
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