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The Observer / Jonathan Cape / Comica graphic short story competition

 
 
Suedey! SHOT FOR MEAT!
18:36 / 12.10.07
So recently the Observer ran this competition asking for graphic short stories. Or short one page comics. Although the format was actually quite a big page. Anyway. The winning entrant will be printed in this Sunday's (14th October) edition of the paper. I'd encourage you to go forth and buy it because, well - comics! And also - well, it's nice isnt it?

But what's this, you say? That's not particularly interesting? You already knew all this? You hate the competition and everything it stands for? It's too late to enter and you were already going to get the paper and read this new comic by some no doubt exciting new talent anyway?

But what with all the winners being notified by now and so forth... we can get to another fun part! Various people's entries have been popping up on blogs and websites and so forth. Comics, right there. Ready to go. Just there waiting, begging to be read and perused.

And so regardless of the pros and cons of such competition which I'm sure we could all debate back and forth endlessly, the fact is - I feel certain that there's enough work out there from this to make for a fine exhibition or even some great oversized comic in itself.

And you know, it wouldn't do for the rest to be overlooked. We're all winners here! Etc! So without further ado, there's comics to be read -

The Winner - Christine Brighton - "Away In A Manger" (pdf)

The Runner Up - Stuart Kolakovic - "The Box"

Third Place - "The Waitress" by Finn Dean and Sam Green

Adam Cadwell - "Spilt Soda"

John Cei Douglas - "The Masculine Front"

Marc Ellerby - "I Need To Stop Falling In Love On Trains"

Myfanwy Tristram - "Seaweed" (pdf)

Jim Medway - "Fight Warrior"

Peter Beare's tale of a museum attendants lunch

Daryl Cunningham - "Dementia Ward"

Martin Simpson - "The Hidden Puppeteer"

"Smokers" - by Team Sputnik

Paul Rainey - "Dear Robert and partner"

Jessica Freeman - "Iceland"

"Wham, bam, hamster Dan" - Jack Noel

"The Landlady" - Peter Scott and Johnny Patterson

"Teddy Bears Picnic" - James Wilks

Leonie O'Moore - "Neighborhood"

"Chocolate Malted" - Laurie J Proud

"King Midas" by Lord Hurk

Ciaran Cross - "ade"

"Gollum plays country and western" - John Riordan


Also if you happened to enter and would like to share, please do so. I can update the list as we go, and I'm really hoping some more pop up. There is also a group on Flickr collecting up people's entries, that people can add their work to if they wish.

Comic appreciation go!
 
 
Spaniel
20:41 / 12.10.07
Suedey, I will come back to this thread.

I just need to get married first.
 
 
Haus of Mystery
20:44 / 12.10.07
Excuses, excuses.

I'm such a dumbo, I actually forgot about the Observer competition. I'm thoroughly engaged with my new top secret project so it slipped my mind.
Nice stuff by the way Suedey - your love affair with romance comics is nice, and original to boot.
 
 
Nelson Evergreen
09:38 / 15.10.07
Ha, I didn't enter either, despite being pretty damn enthusiastic about doing so. Clean forgot.

Fine though the winning strip was, it wasn't exactly a surprising choice, was it? Knowingly old fashioned childrens' illustration style, muted colours, bleakly humorous and thoroughly contemporary dialogue. Beautifully done, without a doubt... good to look at, funny to read.

The "Manga Comes Of Age" headline above it was bizarre and irksome...

Obviously, there are plenty of very gifted British comics creators lurking below-radar whose work would have been precluded from a shot at winning this simply on visual and tonal grounds. I like that the Observer actually gives a shit, but if they were properly enthused about furthering the profile of sequential storytelling they'd be taking submissions and publishing a page every month/fortnight/week... rather than running the occasional one-off competition.

But there we are.

A further tiny shift towards a climate which allows some of those creators to generate some actual income out of what they do..?
 
 
Suedey! SHOT FOR MEAT!
15:20 / 16.10.07
Just a quick post to note the updated links. I will be back to say something more substantial soon!

As will Boboss and his excuses, I imagine.
 
 
Suedey! SHOT FOR MEAT!
14:02 / 21.10.07
Alright - let's get substantial!

You know, I almost feel a bit guilty about posting so enthusiastically about this now. I don't, of course, because of the sheer wealth and quality of comics on offer (the links in the top post are updated btw, and shall continue to be, as well as the ever expanding flickr group) which is surely the most important thing. But the writing accompanying it all in the paper, and on the paper’s website was incredibly embarrassing and ill informed.

I shoulda known. Well, I guess I did know. But you still hope, eh?

I mean to start with there's the baffling title, "Manga comes of age" (which actually appears to have been changed on the blog version of the same piece). But manga is surely old enough to not just have a bus pass but be consigned to a museum and all practitioners of it actually be considered nostalgic. Except of course it's been going on all this time. And that these are British comics.

As well as the distinction between comics strips and graphic stories – “it really was a short story rather than a comic strip masquerading as such” and the pompous tone condemning comics strips that might deem themselves worthy to masquerade as such.

To me, these are the same thing anyway, and only a pedant would differentiate between the two. I mean yes, perhaps they favour a more literary style of comic but I don't think the importance of such should be forced down people's throats to the detriment of other work. Which is still comics.

But it should come as no surprise that a publication who place so much emphasis in such shame avoiding terms such as "graphic story" use it to wholly define what something is, and which really has no purpose except in distancing ones self from comics; using it to both define and other the entire thing by being dismissive about mere comic strips, which must certainly be of a lower class.

This is especially offensive to me, and really seems to miss the point about what comics are and more importantly what they can be by maintaining a cultural status quo with regard to comics.

But this is the problem I always find with comics coverage found in this sort of broadsheet – it is what they do, and what they always do – to see it as a distinct divide in quality and class, and that only one of these things can be worthy of attention. And of course, those things can be good, but I don’t think it can ever be healthy to divide up an artform as such.

What I don’t like about this is that as well as the automatic assumption that one thing is better than the other, it betrays exactly what informs all the writing about comics to be found here. And that’s just bad writing, and only reinforces negative ideas about comics themselves. But that is very telling of the sort of coverage that comics do receive more widely, and the positives are really only ever thrown in one direction. And I'm not saying that's not good, just that it disappoints me that in all the articles I've ever really read about these new ages of comics, they're always about the same people or same types of work or genres. And have been for years.

It's like criticising Die Hard because it's an action film (which, uh, I guess does happen) and not some art house thing. But they're still both films, it does no good to pretend it’s a different medium. Or criticising pop music because it's disposable and unimportant, but praising Radiohead all day long. (And personally, these are the things that are important to me and what crystallises the fact that I never think any comic I made – although I feel I should mention I don’t think my entry was great by any means, I am simply interested in analysing the state of comics criticism in our culture* - would be that interesting to them because of the things which I value, which is why it seems so affronting when they talk their pompous talk).

And casually disregarding Asterix and Tin Tin as "not art" seems especially counter-productive, especially when compared to this new dawning of an age which we shall indeed now pat ourselves on the back for. It is unfortunate to witness someone patting themselves on the back for what they see as their involvement of the coming of age of Manga, but I guess that's just what you get from the literary editor talking about comics – yeah, comics! – because he’ll frame them in the only way he can. "Lets be smug about graphic stories" would have perhaps been a more appropriate title.

Indeed, the little write up on the Random House graphic story prize website linked to in the first post seems a lot more balanced and friendly, even suggesting debate over cartoon strip/graphic story definitions. You can't help feeling the paper's influence.

And one sad thing about all this is that I think a lot of this negative feeling has in turn been displaced on to the winning comics, which I think is wrong and just seems bitter. I am fine with all the winners - and well done to them too - but I think it really doesn't help to have your work printed alongside such rubbish.

Personally, I didn't like the overall winner that much; I much preferred the runner up entry (which conversely felt more like a short story to me) where every panel had purpose and flowed nicely to a point, felt full and meant more to me as a whole rather than what seemed more like less well paced random silliness from the winner. I dunno, they might have seen it as dark wit, but it just felt a bit thin and lacking in content to me. But it's still good work, and I've seen enough people praising it to realise it's just not really my taste.

It's disappointing to sense a vaguely negative feeling left around the internet, lots of "you should have won" and cynical feelings of being hard done by, because I don't think there's anything surprising about the outcome and also I don't want to seem like I'm linking all of other entrants I can find purely from a misguided sense of injustice. I just think it's nice and positive, and good for people's work to be seen. And with the format, it's unlikely to be of much use anywhere else.

I still feel these competitions are a good thing in general - and my thinking will always be to get some work in there because it's always good to do so - but by and large it could quite easily be a much better thing too (and seeing as it will apparently be run annually, maybe it will be). Indeed, the winner was printed smaller than it appeared specified by the format, to accommodate everything on only one page (or was the only specification to fit on the size of an Observer page, I can't remember), and we didn't get to hear from any of the other judges. It felt a bit like it was shunted off in to a corner and no big deal was made of it, though. I'd half expected at least two pages, with a bit more about the whole thing. Still, it is what it is and what it was always going to be.

And also, none of these things can really take away from any of the work produced - and it appears that are a lot more people making good comics than perhaps I realised - and that makes me very pleased indeed. Lovely.

And also - thank you MacReady, nay IRON MAN! I'm glad you liked my page. You knows I like a bit of romance! I'm quite sad that neither you or Nelson managed to enter. You guys!

*And I think I’d roughly place it somewhere alongside computer games journalism as presented in the mass media.
 
 
iamus
22:19 / 05.11.07


Here's three-quarters of what would've been my entry, had I heard about the thing in time to actually get my shit together. As it stands I didn't have a ghosts chance in hell of finishing it in time, and it got sidelined for a bit when I knew it wouldn't be ready and I had other stuff coming up. When fully finished, it'll have another panel at the bottom, text for each panel and be in full colour. The colouring will break my computer.

I tried to think of something I could do that would be a bit leftfield. Outside the format they'd be wanting while also outside the format they definitely wouldn't be wanting. Strapped for time, I co-opted an old Temple post of mine from hereabouts and went to work boiling down the essentials of that. The post should give a much better idea of what's going on.

The plan was to stick as much of the waffle as possible directly into the art. I took a few passes at the text, to try and find how to boil it down into the bare bones, essentially using the text as just a compass pointer to the art, to give the reader the right context to find their way about the story that's here. The text is still unfinalised, but I managed to get it to a point where I was satisfied I would be able to run with the art and then fix the problematic wording later.

I've been a bit interested in layered, symmetrical work. The idea is that once the thing's been absorbed once and you know what it's about then it becomes the one thing. It's a narrative, but not a sequential one necessarily. Things flow down, over the panel borders, while other things flow up, behind the panel borders to hopefully give the whole thing a feeling of co-dependance, so no part can be viewed in isolation. No idea if it came off as well as I'd like though.

Hopefully when the colour comes in it'll help pull the thing together. Colour's probably the first thing I worked out on paper and it was the major factor in getting the composition to settle into the way it is.

Now its missed the competition I may just put it up on the web. I might try doing something with it in Flash, so it can be viewed a panel at a time or all at once, with or without text. We'll see. I'll just need to make sure I get back to it.


And I'm not saying that's not good, just that it disappoints me that in all the articles I've ever really read about these new ages of comics, they're always about the same people or same types of work or genres. And have been for years.

I wasn't particularly enamoured with the winner myself. It was good. It was solid and professional and kind of funny. I can't say it didn't really deserve to win, because it probably did, in the circumstances of the competition.

I think it's probably in large part to do with exposure. It's a problem that could probably be solved by way of what Nelson's said upthread. It's easy to define a narrow view of something when you come into contact with it infrequently. That's going to tend to breed going with what you know. If they were indeed to do this thing more regularly, or take submissions for weekly or fortnightly publication, you'd quickly see a massive diversification in the content they're displaying.

As it is, with such little space set over for showcasing comic talent, it's inevitable that those with the broadest appeal, that require as little foreknowledge of the medium as possible, are going to win out. I think it's probably a particularly easy problem to fix, it just needs the right time and place set aside.

I always think the onus of being taken seriously lies completely with the person putting out the work. If we feel we're not been taken seriously as a medium then it's a call to rexamine what it is we're doing and either find new people to showcase to, or produce work that gives people no choice but to make them sit up and take notice.


I think a lot of the entries I've seen are great comics that made me laugh and smile, but very few actually made me sit up and take notice. Very few actually punched their way up out of the rest to show me what comics could really DO while still remaining accessible. For such a versatile medium that's capable of being so many different things to so many people, I found that a little disheartening. But this is all personal taste, and I don't want to come of as a snob. I really did like a lot of what I read tons. It's just I'm always aware we could be doing things better.
 
 
Spaniel
09:33 / 06.11.07
I'm going to read this stuff in a bit.

Will come back then
 
 
iamus
10:45 / 07.11.07
Aye aye. Heard it, sunshine.


Use it myself all the time, in fact....
 
 
Spaniel
11:22 / 07.11.07
Hey, I dun read it all. Some good some bad, not enough substance for me to really get into it, though.

I do enjoy the anecdotal stuff.
 
  
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