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Night, Papers.
And, Leigh, I see what you mean. Perhaps a few moments of punctuated inarticulateness? So it would stand out as a trait, rather than just authorial.
That uncertainty, an almost by the book (but he doesn't know what the book says precisely) tone, comes through pretty good and it's a likeable persona, certainly. It'd be a shame to lose it, true.
Which means... not much a clue, but I'll get back to you if I think of something. Try things, I guess, until something clicks. |
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