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I give Barbelith a present. An original comic with some of your favorite characters

 
 
Jack Denfeld
08:24 / 21.02.07










 
 
Mistoffelees
08:42 / 21.02.07
Aw that shucks, Charlie Brown!
 
 
Regrettable Juvenilia
08:48 / 21.02.07
Is the new darker tone to be found in Denfeld's work emblematic of a return to the "grim and gritty" aesthetic of the 1980s? See also 'The Clown At Midnight'? DISCUSS.
 
 
Benny the Ball
09:01 / 21.02.07
It's endemic of the journey through grim and gritty to arrive at the hope of groth and change for the better - with a little help from the old guard and a touch of metatextual hyper-continuity bending one day we all will fly too, all us little Charlie Brown wannabes....
 
 
8===>Q: alyn
13:53 / 21.02.07
There is definitely something kind of faux-80s irony going on with that Lichtensteinesque duo-tone work in panel three.
 
 
electric monk
14:49 / 21.02.07
Denfeld, you magnificent BASTARD! Another triumph!
 
 
Elijah, Freelance Rabbi
15:30 / 21.02.07
The third panel is ALMOST breaking the 4th wall. It is as if Denfeld is DARING THE READER to break the wall themselves.
 
 
8===>Q: alyn
16:26 / 21.02.07
Does Charlie Brown's kryptonite hand metarelate to Cannonball's cannonball hand? Can we get someone in here to annotate this stuff?
 
 
Less searchable M0rd4nt
17:36 / 21.02.07
Once again the sheer richness and depth of Denfeld's work astounds. The second panel alone is a veritable cornucpia of post-post-modern symbolism. The snowy waste with its lone dead tree seems like a cheeky nod to the anatomical engravings of the 17th Century; while the sleeping beagle on his vacant, light-bedecked kennel, oblivious to the suffering of the mutilated figure in the foreground is surely an allagory of modern life--lulled to sleep on the back of the [EMPTY] Spectacle and reduced to the status of a pet, at once bereft of our rightful shelter and insulated from the profound experience represented by the one-handed Charlie Brown.
 
 
D Terminator XXXIII
17:50 / 21.02.07
There are already eight different posts on Denfeld's original comic. Here’s another. It’s for people who’ve read the comic, and it’s dedicated to the modest proposal that the comic, popular as it’s been on Barbelith, totally sucks. The main unspoken thoughts already more than a thousand minutes long, full of speculation and spiral dynamics and subsequent sightings of the Brown Mob, and within a few short days it’ll be full of the new thoughts. I felt a new post would be better able to step aside from all that As The Series Continues… stuff and to concentrate more on being critical.
 
 
John Octave
18:01 / 21.02.07
Here's my annotations. Feel free to expand.

PANEL 1: Note that, while Leatherface is narratively running toward Charlie Brown, he appears in perspective to be in front of Charlie Brown and actually running away from him. The conflicting perspective initiates us into the defiance of norms the story is preparing to explore. Of course, such "incorrect" perspective is also the hallmark of artist Pablo Picasso, who is generally believed to be Denfeld's great-uncle. Also if importance is that seemingly random "A" up in the corner. It is, on one level, a distillation of objectivist philosophy; Not even "A is A," merely "A." It will also figure into the final panel of this piece.

PANEL 2: The hand becomes "realistic" when severed from Charlie Brown's cartoon body. Bodily injury is a "real world" situation encroaching on the more traditionally innocent and unchanging cartoon world, and the incongruity is pointed out to us.

PANEL 3: The last panel gave us violence, and this one gives us profanity. This panel appears to show a Peanuts frame as a museum piece. This is a parody of 1980s superhero comics, which added superficial depth (and notice the canvas is 3-dimensional!) via violence, sex and profanity in an attempt to be "sophisticated" "art".

PANEL 4: The word boxes with mixed case lettering are done in a pastiche of MAD Magazine. It uses the original art, however, so it suggests that a parody of "The Invisibles" is indistinguishable from the real thing.

PANEL 5: 2 fingers are raised, 3 fingers are down. Put together it is 23, a magicqk number (Source: "Anarchy for the Masses")

PANEL 6: Remember the "A" in the first panel? The letters in this panel are upside down, showing that the narrative has become topsy-turvy over the course of these six panels, a final summation of the piece's themes. Indeed, where before we had a realistic situation imposed on a cartoon, here we have a crude, cartoony shirt imposed on a somewhat more realistically rendered comics figure. But this defiance and reversal of expectations is liberating to the confining world of comics, and our protagonist can finally fly.
 
 
8===>Q: alyn
21:01 / 21.02.07
Thanks, Octave, I think that's just what we needed. Don't you think we're looking at a Charlie Brown/King Mob/Cannonball fictionsuit here? And Lex Luthor... interesting that these characters are all iconically bald except for Cannonball.
 
 
8===>Q: alyn
21:01 / 21.02.07
But of course a cannonball itself is bald. So, Cannonball is metaphorically bald.
 
 
Triplets
16:24 / 23.02.07
It's more like The Hand ó Gory!

*laugh track*

*freeze frame*

*credits*
 
  
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