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Triplet's is so wrong,
Good haikus hurt and pull sighs
If formal form's used.
Inspired by Buddha,
The whole is in the moment.
There's no need for I.
Line one is something
linked to the season
or else, the place.
Line two: detail.
some timeless moment of perception
that ego flees from.
Final line is flight
to a metaphor's sweet hug.
They call it a "cut".
"Drowned dog in brown water,
bubbles over wet brown fur.
Swallows in corn fields."
A drinking game too,
composed in the pub.
Goes round: limp biscuit.
The challenge: simple.
Don't repeat a single word.
Else you drink sake.
toksik, would you mind
if I wrote in tenge?
It does give me joy. |
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