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The best Comics Short Stories

 
 
Janean Patience
18:15 / 28.09.06
I've been reading a lot of short stories lately, Dangerous Visions followed by Borges's Labyrinths, and I got to thinking about the relationship between comics and short fiction. It's obviously not something the mainstream market's geared to - the stories of Superman and Batman are millions of pages long already. Even in the indie sector, there's not much consciously aping the short stories most prose-only writers produce. Perhaps that's because there's more credibility in attempting to produce an equivalent of the novel. Novels are the ones that win literary plaudits. A truly lengthy work in comics, though, the equivalent of a novel, runs to many hundreds of pages. This could be one of the elements that alienates the non-comics reader: "You want to read comics? You'll love Sandman/Invisibles/Preacher. Here's book one. Don't worry, there's plenty more!"

Some ground rules to try and keep this on track. Given that a comics story of 40 pages can be marketed as a graphic novel, I'm going to set an arbitary limit of "less than a normal comic" for short stories. Whether that means less than 28, 24, or 22 is your call. (80-page giants aren't and never were normal comics since you're asking.)

Short stories should contain all the information the reader needs within their pages, which means no atandalone issues of longer series. Let's not assume everyone knows who Green Lantern is, or that Captain America runs the Avengers. They should feature character who appear there and nowhere else, rather than being fragments of a larger narrative.

And they should have something to say. Doesn't have to be much. Much as I loved the Flash fragment in Brendan McCarthy's Solo, it wasn't a story so much as sequential art. My personal definition of a short story is something that has a beginning, middle and end, but makes you feel that it existed before and goes on afterwards. It's just that we only read one snapshot moment.

Okay, some examples. Not trying to be obscure here. There just ain't many short stories about.

Adrian Tomine, Pink Frosting
Tomine's one of the few who's consciously mined short stories as a genre. Sometimes he's too obvious in that, copying Carver a little too much. This two-pager about a brief encounter that turns to violence, possibly imaginary, stayed with me for too long. The pictures and the captions come unstuck from each other and juxtapose beautifully, and horribly. It's in the Sleepwalk collection.

Dan Clowes, The Gold Mommy
The text never says so, but this is obviously a dream. Dreams are hard to do in fiction. Someone once said 'Tell a dream, lose a reader,' and that's usually right. This one, partly because of Clowes's matter-of-fact artwork, the visual cues and connections seamless throughout, works a treat. It's not really about anything except a mood, a feeling of unease and important stuff left undone. It ends, like so many short stories, with a bullet. This one is in the Caricature collection.

We'll Sleep In My Old Room, Chris Ware
Again this story bears the influence of American masters like Carver and Salinger, a slice-of-life with an unmentioned but central detail. It winds around the page as Ware's stuff does, which in this case cushions the reader against the pain and emotion - one sharp moment can't be painful when it's surrounded by so many duller ones. It's about a girl, and a relationship she once had, and the failure of time to move on and it's intensely sad. It's in the McSweeney's Comics Issue.

Alan Moore & Rick Veitch, How Things Work Out
Breaking my own rule slightly because this is ostensibly a Greyshirt story, but you'd never know it. Greyshirt is a minor character tied to a chair with, I think, one line. If you've read this, you'll remember it - the one with four panels a page, each a floor of a building, each a time period. The top floor's the 90s, the next down's the 70s, then the 50s, then the 30s. Whoever called Alan Moore comic's greatest formalist was thinking of this. The story runs every which way, ties up like you wouldn't believe and is affecting on an emotional and a structural level. It's in Tomorrow Stories, either #2 or Book One.

The Hollow Circus, Peter Milligan & Brendan McCarthy
If you've not read this, you have to. The best Milligan/McCarthy collaboration ever, not to forget lettering by the late great Tom Frame. It's eight black-and-white collage pages, each a collection of surreal images, and a story that connects them all about a deformed boy and what he did that was wrong. It's the story that made me think there should be more short stories in comics, and it's utterly superb. To quote:
"JOSEPH THOUGHT THAT HIS WORLD MUST BE SO SMALL, WITH SO FEW THINGS IN IT, THAT EVERYTHING HAD TO BE MORE THAN JUST ITSELF. THE THINGS IN HIS ROOM WERE LIKE PEOPLE WHO DID A HARD DAY'S WORK AS A SHOE, FOR INSTANCE, AND THEN HAD A PART-TIME JOB AS A BED OR A BUS, JUST TO MAKE ENDS MEET."
Sadly this is one of the harder to find, in Atomeka's A1 anthology, the first issue.

There are others but I'm knackered. I'd love to hear suggestions, because there must be loads I've missed. Please.
 
 
Hallo, Paper Spaceboy
02:38 / 29.09.06
Depends, though; I'd actually called McCarthy's Solo issue - as a whole - a fragmented, experimental short story. There's plenty of room for short, open-ended fiction as well, so you could take even one piece - like the Johnny Sorrow sequence, or the Lord of Nothing - and it works.

Otherwise, I'm not sure what stories might pop into mind - like you say, most sequential art work ends up serialized or more in a move toward novelization. And the thing with serialization is that if you look around - there a plenty of interconnected short stories out there, so you could fit Moore's Jack B. Quick ones in, or the Cobweb. Interconnected short stories don't necessarily take place sequentially or serially but characters, settings, et cetera repeat. Some writers have certain characters they're drawn back to...
 
 
sleazenation
12:11 / 30.09.06
Sorry to get all about the structure but isn't worth asking what makes story, specifically a comics story, short? Is 22 pages, that seemingly constituting the standard length of a single issue of a comic book from one of the main publishers of such items in North America, the benchmark? Or is it 'too long'?

2000AD, the vetran British comic anthology had a standard feature of 5-8 page narratives entitled 'future shocks' Do these count? Do other narratives that were continued over a number of progs not count?

This question becomes more interesting with the ongoing trend for longer narratives in comics. Stories told over a single issue used to be the norm in the product of the main comic publishers of North America, this is increasingly less the case today.
 
 
DavidXBrunt
19:47 / 30.09.06
Well it's against the rules set out in the thread but John Wagner has always been a master of short stories in his run of Judge Dredd. Some writers will pen epic stories with bangs and whizzes and explosions for 3 months and it'll be hollow and unsatisfying. John Wagner can write an emotionally satisfying, funny, exciting story in six pages. Another writer would have taken years to off a major character like McGruder. John took one week.

And the Future Shocks are rarer these days but still crop up. Alan Moores 2k shorts are out in a chunky anthology.
 
 
sleazenation
19:55 / 30.09.06
I should add that some of the comics I grew up reading, British humour comics from IPC, told stories in a single page, two pages at most. Are these short stories? or something else...
 
 
DavidXBrunt
21:17 / 30.09.06
Well I would say yes but not under the definition of the thread.
 
 
Dan Fish - @Fish1k
21:37 / 30.09.06
This will sound really sad, but my fave short is the Morrison/Quitely 'New Toys' from one of those DC Vertigo anthologies (Weird War Tales?). Partly for nostalgia (FQ draws Action Man EXACTLY as I remember him, big press-studs and all), but also for the freakish direction the story takes at the end.
 
 
andrewdrilon
21:43 / 30.09.06
Some of my favorite Grant short stories:

"Empire of Chairs" Doom Patrol #63
--wrapped up his entire run beautifully in a single issue that stood on its own (I should know; this is the first Grant issue I ever read.)

"New Toys" Weird War Tales #3
--9-page short story with fabulous Frank Quitely art, which uses the "Weird War Tales" antho theme in an offbeat manner to tackle a good number of Grant leitmotifs.

"Best Man Fall" Invisibles #12
--a gem among gems in Grant's magnum-opus Invisibles, chronicling the entire life of a seemingly unimportant foot soldier in a fragmented storytelling style.

"Sweet Dreams, Superwoman" All-Star Superman #3
--fantastic self-contained issue that depicts Lois Lane's birthday as the alluring Superwoman, a sweet and light (yet deep when you think hard about it) "date" story that truly captures the emotion and the "sense of wonder" of Superman's world.

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Other fantastic comic short stories:

"The Magician and the Snake" Dark Horse's Happy Endings anthology
by Mike Mignola and Katie Mignola
--possibly the BEST short story in comic form I've read. Elegantly simple and beautiful; evokes the wonder and tragedy of a good fairy/folktale in a story about friendship, loyalty, duty and death. GOOD SHIT.

"Big Sky" Global Frequency #5
by Warren Ellis and John J Muth
--wonderful sci-fi story that discusses the gray areas between science and magic surrounding a strange incident in an isolated town involving mass insanity and an angel

"Promethea: Little Margie in Misty Magic Land" Tomorrow Stories Special #2
by Steve Moore and Eric Shanower
--great little comics short utilizing the tropes and styles of Winsor McCay's "Little Nemo in Slumberland" to tell a quintessential Alice-type story about childhood and the loss of innocence.

"The Sweetheart Superman Forgot" Superman v1 #65
--a strange 12-page social-realist-like Superman story from the Silver Age that's just heart-rendingly beautiful. I couldn't find the names of the artist and writer, sadly. Read it if you can find it.

"On This Corner" Solo #3
by Paul Pope
--sensuous mood piece by "the Jim Morrison" of comics--a short comic in a storytelling manner recalling Mervyn Peake's Ghormenghast or the 1st chapter of William Burroughs' Wild Boys.

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Believe it or not, there is a truly excellent Archie comic short story--I can't seem to find it in my stuff--it's in one of the Betty & Veronica digests where Betty's dad goes through some mid-age crisis and has a long talk with Betty about growing old. It's beautiful, I tell you, and it actually made me cry. Strange to find a short comic story this good in one of the most formulaic comics franchises ever, but there you have it.

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Oh and for a great comics vignette--Brendan McCarthy's Solo #12 had a couple--the best of them being the untitled one about a free thought landing in a garden.

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SHAMELESS PLUG: Check out KARE -KARE KOMIKS over at Warren Ellis' The Engine where I attempt to create good short stories in comic form.
 
 
Mario
22:31 / 30.09.06
It may or may not be a short story, but it should be on this list anyway. The Goodwin-Simonson Manhunter.
 
 
Janean Patience
11:56 / 01.10.06
Immediately I wrote my definition of a short story, I started noticing problems with it. It excludes Sherlock Holmes, for example, who appeared mainly in short stories which formed a narrative continuum. If you count stories which feature recurring characters then yeah, many Dredd stories would count alongside most Silver Age Superman, the recent Batman black & white stuff, two volumes of Grendel black, white & red, and many a single issue of a title.

I suppose I was aiming for something more self-consciously literary, which is why I outlined conditions. Feel free to ignore them, though it might be nice if you could explain why.

And if there's going to be a Dredd story, let's have one of the Otto Sump ones.
 
 
DavidXBrunt
17:10 / 01.10.06
Well, yes, Otto Sump is genius but from memory they're all two parters. 'Uncle Umps Umpty Candy' is a belting self contained story which charts the rise and fall of an individual thinker who only wanted to bring happiness to a world that's just not ready for it. Silly, funny, satirical, understanding of human nature and also has a super tall Top Hat, and a computer jonesing for another sample of toffee.

Wagner, Grant, McMahon.

There are one or two Nikolai Dante and Sinister Dexter one parters that function as solid short stories too.
 
 
Janean Patience
20:24 / 01.10.06
Otto Sump is genius but from memory they're all two parters.

That Gunge story, shortly after the Apocalypse War? The story when he was selling Smart Pills? Both stand-alone. Okay, Sob Story and the Ugly Clinic were two-parters...

I know far too much about Otto Sump.
 
 
DavidXBrunt
20:52 / 03.10.06
Good call. I stand corrected?

You know a lot about Sump? Then here's a challenge...why were his last words "Rosebud"?
 
 
This Sunday
19:19 / 04.10.06
There's a short amateur-translated/scanlated over at the Lililicious site, called something like 'After School in Shibuya', involving a schoolgirl getting shit from her classmates and temporarily running away with another girl, while they act oblique and then googly-eyed at each other for fifteen or twenty pages. It's got interesting enough art, the plots kinda there, but the emotions and sappiness really pull it along, at least for me. There aren't enough sappy comics, frankly, in an unabashedly emotive way. It's almost all the other direction, from 'Batman/Superman' issue four to 'Why I Hate Saturn'.

Secondary to that, Charles Burns' 'Spicy Defective' (that is it, right?) and all three stories in that Viz-released Keiko Nishi collection, 'Love Song'.
 
 
Janean Patience
20:26 / 04.10.06
You know a lot about Sump? Then here's a challenge...why were his last words "Rosebud"?

Aw, man. Otto died? I didn't know that.

I guess it's possible to know too much about Otto Sump without knowing everything. I quit 2000AD shortly after #1000, mostly without regrets though if the option to just follow Dredd and everything John Smith writes was there I would've taken it.

Tell me about Otto's final days. And yeah, 2000AD has been the home of many a great short story. The Alan Moore & Alan Davies one about the time-travelling rock group comes to mind, and the Moore/Gibbons Time Twister about the cops, with two panels each repeated three times. My 2000AD collection is in one of those advanced filing systems called "a stack of boxes in a cupboard" so they're not immediately accessible. What other shorts do you remember, David?

Secondary to that, Charles Burns' 'Spicy Defective' (that is it, right?)

Wasn't it Hard-Boiled Defective? The ones with El Borbah? I was trying to remember another book of Burns stories, each only slightly interconnected with the other, which had a tale about a kid with a Jesus brand on his back. It began with Big Baby, perhaps?

Just last night I read They Found The Car by an Italian artist called Gipi, published on its own by Fantagraphics. It's exactly the kind of short story I was thinking of in the initial post, 30 A4 pages in beautiful black and white with grey ink washes, a story which shows just one fragment of a much larger narrative arc and at the same time tells you everything you need to know. None of the characters are identified by name, only by their actions of a moment ago. It's a crime story told peacefully, with great care and deliberation, like a Jim Thompson story turned into an eight-minute pop epic. Two full-page splashes have the most arresting skies I've seen in comics. Recommended to everybody.
 
 
DavidXBrunt
06:53 / 05.10.06
Sump had setbacks over the years but had still made a fortune. When Citizen Sump was found dead in a locked room in his palatial dwelling Dredd interviewed the people around him to try and find who was responsible. Sumps dying mother vouldn't leave bed unassisted and though she was bitter about the years of embarassment caused by being mother to the ugliest man alive. His business partner had nothing to gain. Otto trusted him implicitly and, from studying the accounts. Ottos beautiful wife had clearly started out as a gold digger but had actually fallen in love with a sweet man who wanted her to be happy.

It turned out that Sump had been murdered by his mother who had been carried into the room by her robo-doctor and shot him because she'd never been free of him and wanted to die without his face staring down at her?

And Rosebud? Sumps only happy memory of childhood was the time his mother had, for once, comforted him. That wasn't a big, pustulant, boil on his face. That was a wee rosebud.

That doesn't sound as good as it is. A great story that fleshes out the character before finishing him off. John Wagner has been putting a lot of his house in order recently. Orlock executed, Choppers had his midlife crisis, Mean Machine is reconciled to a lifetime behind bars, Death is trapped in another dimension...
 
  
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