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| I hate to say this because it's going to have to be negative, but though there's obviously some strong political ideas behind it, the formal side of the thing is just messy, I'm afraid. It looks like an idea for a piece rather than a piece itself- the soft edges don't fit well with the hard ones, and the drawn part doesn't fit well with the photograph. I think it would work much better as a simple caption, in Arial, italic. |
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