The interface is miserable, but the story is engrossing, and grippingly told. You really felt the Kaled's plight once it was finally freed of its iron prison.
Yeah, Deviant Art isn't the best way to tell a story. Just they're large pictures, and I couldn't post 'em to Barbelith itself without breaking frames.
you could make the text bigger so you can use browser resizing (you put width=500 after the image url) to fit them in.
also, using flickr.com might suit storytelling a little better.
they have a slideshow function, innit.