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Italian Fajitas with Ice cream cube ice coffee

 
 
yichihyon
04:18 / 07.10.05
For Uhm Jung Hwa and myself for one lunch and drinks to be shared: My recipe Italian Fajitas with Ice cream cube ice coffee: Torillas, beef or shrimp or both cooked with butter and sliced onions and garlic, grated cheddar cheese, Philadelphia Cream cheese, Salsa, sliced black olives, and sliced avacado. Ice cream cubes, freeze and shape hazelnut coffee creamer or pack ice cream in cubes and make iced coffee without the watered ice. No water downed drinks. Applied to liquors and fruit drinks.
 
 
Regrettable Juvenilia
10:18 / 07.10.05
 
 
All Acting Regiment
00:50 / 08.10.05
What were you aiming at with this, then? Is it a poem or prose? I think it might be better with line-breaks:

Italian Fajitas with Ice Cream cube ice coffee

For Uhm Jung Hwa and myself
for one
lunch and drinks to be shared:
My recipe.
Italian Fajitas
with Ice cream cube ice coffee:
Torillas, beef or shrimp or both
cooked with butter
and sliced onions and garlic,
grated cheddar cheese,
Philadelphia Cream cheese,
Salsa, sliced black olives,
and sliced avacado.

Ice cream cubes.

Freeze and shape hazelnut coffee.
Creamer or pack ice cream in cubes-
And make iced coffee without the watered ice.
No water downed drinks.
Applied to liquors and fruit drinks.
 
 
Alex's Grandma
12:02 / 08.10.05
I'd have possibly gone for even more line breaks -

For Uhm Jung Hwa

And myself

For one

Lunch

And drinks

To be

Shared, etc, but you're absolutely right Legba, the piece takes on a real sense of immanent tragedy with your suggested amendments.
 
 
yichihyon
18:38 / 09.10.05
Its a cooking recipe and an attempt to bridge Italian and Mexican cuisine. Also a new way to Ice things no more watered down drinks.
 
 
All Acting Regiment
19:47 / 09.10.05
We guessed it was something to do with food, but it would have been easier to criticise it as a recipe if it'd been in paragraphs.
 
 
toughest, fastest, fatest
19:53 / 09.10.05
it's lovely with the line breaks, almost haiku like in it's sparse intensity.
 
  
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