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3 Day Novel Writing Contest

 
 
sine
22:19 / 15.08.05
As I stare down the barrel at my sixth time entering the 3 Day Novel Writing Contest, I'm wondering if any other 'lithers are going in this year. Anyone? Any veterans perhaps? I'd be especially interested in any stories involving how other people have approached the particularities of the form: planning, outlines, execution and editing.

For my part, this year I've vowed not to repeat my errors - that is, writing straight up to the final minute without leaving myself time for proper review and revision. My lengths have increased as the years have racked up (1st - 100 double spaced pages on the nose; 2nd - 90; 3rd -150; 4th - 210; 5th - 260) so now I figure I can hammer out enough text in the first two days to let me reserve the third for trimming excess verbiage.

Anyway, thought I'd dangle a thread and see. Anyone else taking the 72 hour plunge this year?
 
 
Eloi Tsabaoth
09:56 / 16.08.05
Holy Zombie Jesus, three days?
Actually, considering that fake vampire novel in the text adventure thread was the most enjoyable paragraph I've written all year, maybe I could crank out one of those...
 
 
Billuccho!
02:22 / 17.08.05
I was totally in until I saw the $50 registration few. So if I do bother, it'll just be for kicks.
 
 
Solitaire Rose as Tom Servo
05:21 / 14.09.05
I'm going to do it next year...but it will be so tightly plotted I will be writing it like a robot.

Any ideas on how best to get through the weekend?
 
 
sine
16:36 / 14.09.05
I've tried a variety of approaches - and this year's was not my best. Unfortunately, I worked my outline in detail beforehand, enough so that two days before the event I realized I wanted to give that story more thorough treatment.

So I switched horses onto something more or less off the top of my head, and ended up with a sprawling mess called Festschrift about Nietzsche's Overman as filtered through Lord Byron, with cannibalism and Pythagoras and teen sex and dentistry and mutation and the Great Flood... very animated, but lacking in a certain narrative coherence. I blame the dexies. An experiment. Lesson learned.

Of the five other novels, I would say my best approach was the following:

I started from an established myth form, one that was already tried and true (it was a classic Biblical story). No concerns about the basic structure, just my elaboration and spin. Then I sketched out my version of it for the outline, hitting on the key scenes I wanted to elaborate, and the theme I wanted to stress. I did some light character sketching, focusing specifically on speech patterns and the emotional notes of various character interactions. I selected a small number of setting locations (five) and wrote a list of ten words characteristic of each. That was it for outline - maybe three pages all told.

For the actual writing: I napped in the evening of the Friday before, and woke at about eleven to start at dead midnight; then I hammered away for the first twenty hours with occasional breaks for bathroom, to grab a fistful of food, to make more coffee, to review the outline, to pace and chain smoke and mumble to myself, etc. Food was kept simple and eaten with one hand while scrolling with the other. I slept for four hours, rose, worked for another twenty, slept eight, worked for another twenty, half of which was editorial.

I cued up 200 mp3s on random-repeat (Frank Black) with headphones to shut out street noise distractions. I did not communicate my material with family or friends even when I was breathlessly excited with a passage, and took only a short break when someone dropped by to see if I was alive - I find people will do this even if you tell them not to. You however, will be too wrapped in your book to communicate about whatever normal thing they wish to communicate about, and will either slide into a trance silence of furious contemplation, or begin thrusting your finger into the air in Archimedal fashion and explaining the brilliance of the word you chose for such-and-such a paragraph while they squint at you with fright. In short, you will be non-functional for the 72 hours, socially speaking.

The specifics of the text emerged in play, so to speak, and that's to be expected. I ended with about 210 pages after editing (double spaced 12 point Times New Roman) and was, by and large, happy with it.

I've used other methods, but that was the best in my opinion. They say you can't do charactization and plot effectively in the short span. I say bullshit. Tried-and-true story form; short reference outline focused on essential structure, character interaction, signature language and theme; massive attacks on the writing punctuated for minimal lengths of time by necessities; heroic amounts of caffeine and nicotine; a comfy chair.
 
 
sine
16:46 / 14.09.05
I should perhaps append to this that I have not had the best success with tight plotting in the outline - as time without sleep racks up and derangement comes sniffing at your door, that tight plotting becomes hard to consistently produce and can seem alien, dry and tyrannical. I've found it better to leave room for a bit of craziness in the text and to let your creative musucles stretch a little and go places you didn't expect, to expect surprises with narrative "bumpers" to constrain you. That's just me though, and I've never won.
 
 
babazuf
04:49 / 17.09.05
Next year, you could always pull an R. L. Stevenson and go on a three-day cocaine binge. You could just end up with the next Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde.

Well, either that, or you could end up dead in a bathtub à la Ms. Monroe.
 
  
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