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Proper text layout- notably, line breaks.

 
 
All Acting Regiment
18:07 / 16.06.05
Is this a good way to set out text?

Some of the newer members seem to use it a lot.

I'm not getting at anyone-

but it seems to be a waste of space.

You've got at least 1 & 1/2 unused lines for every line of text.

It also, to my eyes, breaks up the sequence of debate.

I'm writing like this as an example.

What do you think? Is there a consensus over the correct way to set out your text?
 
 
Olulabelle
18:27 / 16.06.05
Not like that.
 
 
All Acting Regiment
20:04 / 16.06.05
Right. I just wondered how many people had a view on this, or whether new posters should be told if there was a "right way".
 
 
Tryphena Absent
20:42 / 16.06.05
Do we have something about this in the Wiki? I'll have a look later!
 
 
Mourne Kransky
21:54 / 16.06.05
In general terms, I'm in favour of having a high space to text ratio because it's easier on the eye. The extreme example at the threadhead is, admittedly, annoying but I would prefer it to the style many of the trolls prefer where the words are crammed in like the interior monologue of a cokehead.

The most effective reports I write or read irl bulletpoint as much as possible and achieve a lot of white space. This wouldn't be approrpriate for the more conversational tone of many posts but, even where a densely argued and complex point is being made, you still need some space to aid digestion.

More than the space, punctuation is desirable. Apart from my personal dislike of unrelenting lower case, the length of sentences is crucial to ease of understanding. Seven to eleven words is the ideal. Double that and you're losing people. Treble it and only your mother will plough through to the end. Hard to comply with these strictures and I have at least two sentences over thirty words long in this post.

As with so many other things, I will forgive any grammatical or orthographic eccentricity if there are some clever turns of phrase and the content is sufficiently meaty. But I may well be just another generally snobbish pretentious asshole mentalist.

A lot of people find Gunning's Fog Index handy when learning how to improve their writing style. I would be rubbish, were I writing for a living.
 
 
Olulabelle
22:23 / 16.06.05
I don't think I've ever counted the words in my sentences. Apart when I slip into short ones. Like now.

I agree that more space is better than less, but basic attention to paragraphs (as so excellently executed by Xoc just now) should do the trick. And I too wish people would use capital letters, but that is becoming increasingly infrequent* in this age of texting.

*Can something be increasingly infrequent?
 
 
ONLY NICE THINGS
01:30 / 17.06.05
Yeah - it means the intervals between occurences grow longer.

This is mainly a question of grammar, isn't it? Some people use single-sentence paragraphs as a matter of course, others no para breaks at all - on occasion I've asked people doing the latter to go back and put in breaks when the dense mass of text has made it actually unreadable, but in general you can't force people to apply the principles of good English to their para breaks any more than you could capitalisation or "would of" for "would have".

Having said which, I am happy to bring back the stoocks for people who think it is funny to create hugelongrunonwords that break frames.
 
  
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