| well to start out, the website design is a huge put-off. even if your intention is to "keep it simple," you can do a hell of a lot better than that. and where are the author names? I'm scared to ask because if all of these are written by you, then you don't really have an e-zine at all... and frankly that's kinda lame. as for the writing itself, I personally don't like the style, but that's just me. I feel as if the stories are stagnant, becuase you're telling, not showing. hope that helps. |
