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Jenny Everywhere - Rock The Vote!

 
 
moriarty
19:42 / 24.04.04
A competition called Strip Fight has chosen Jenny as this week's theme. In it, amateur cartoonists create a one-page comic based around the theme and the public votes on the winner. One of Barbelith's own, Ex, has contributed a lovely little strip.

From the Strip Fight rules. "Do not stuff the ballot box. I have made every attempt to make ballot box stuffing impossible, but just in case... However feel free to tell all your internet buddies to come by and vote for your stuff."

So, if you have the time, please check them out and cast your vote.
 
 
Ex
19:50 / 24.04.04
You're so swift - I've just revived the Barbeplug thread for a mistyped self-promo.

The other Jennies rock. I have a soft spot for the Dinosaur version, but the vaguely Crouching Tiger, Lobster-hand Jenny is way mysterious.
 
 
Bed Head
19:51 / 24.04.04
Oh, aside from just voting, it’s also worth saying out loud: Ex’s contribution is totally fab.

And then voting.
 
 
Our Lady Has Left the Building
06:29 / 25.04.04
Apart from Ex, most of them are wee, although I like Jenny-as-Pacgirl just for the sheer oddity, but Jenny with lobster claw? And Devin MacNeil's strip rips of Family Guy, amongst others. Tony Walsh's is quite good, but doesn't he publish them somewhere seperate and haven't we seen this before?
 
 
miss wonderstarr
06:39 / 25.04.04
Some of those people could have put in a great deal more effort.
 
 
sleazenation
10:32 / 25.04.04
I want to read more of the story of the claw-handed Jenny Everywhere...

Kovacs-
Without wishing to appear flippant or confrontational, every single person who has entered strip fight has already put more effort in than you have - Think you can do better? Prove it and enter the next strip fight challenge -
 
 
sleazenation
10:36 / 25.04.04
Oh and its also interesting spotting/guessing at the influences various existing jenny strips have had on the nine one-pagers we have here.
 
 
moriarty
17:37 / 25.04.04
Kung-fu Jenny with lobster claw is rad. Tony Walsh has been contributing to Strip Fight for awhile now, so this was just a lucky coincidence for him. His contribution is a new piece, a prequel to his Drag Racing Monkey saga.

I know where you're coming from concerning the quality of a few pieces, kovacs, but I imagine that most of these people have jobs, their own online strips and other responsibilities to take care of, so just having one week to create a strip might not be enough time to produce something polished. I know I was completely unable to contribute this week with the end of school and such.
 
 
Our Lady Has Left the Building
17:52 / 25.04.04
Oh, I hadn't really taken in the 'finish in a week' thing. Still, considering people have, as you say, other commitments, when people are turning in stuff of this questionable quality, and sorry Sleaze, just because the people involved have been able to sort out a comic in a week doesn't mean we shouldn't express our opinions, makes you wonder whether the rules should be relaxed a bit.
 
 
sleazenation
19:30 / 25.04.04
flowers - I think there is a substantial difference in critiquing various qualities a strip has (or doesn't have) and criticising the effort the various contributers have put into their work, as Kovacs did.

As the FAQ on stripfight site points out, part of the point of the exercise is get potential comic creators to actually create comics, or as it says
...In addition to giving artists an excuse to get off their rumps and draw a comic strip a week...

Like Moriarty, I can see where Kovacs might be coming from, wanting to see work that is perhaps more polished, and yes, i think that is a valid criticism but Kovacs didn't actually criticise anyones work - what ze did was criticise the one thing that all the contributers manifestly have achieved, namely putting enough effort in to complete a strip while simultaineously drawing attention to the fact that Kovacs had put less effort in than those ze was criticising.

And yeah, I'm not trying to be hard on Kovacs and, as I've said, I think i might be able to see where he's coming from, but Kovacs comments did strike me as a bit wide of the mark...
 
 
Kit-Cat Club
11:25 / 26.04.04
Apart from Ex's, which was clearly the best (and most satisfactory in that it didn't present a fragment of a story) I liked Tony Walsh's (possibly largely because of the historical context), the staring out the dinosaur one, and the get-out-of-bed Jenny, who spoke to my soul...

Ex's was still best though.
 
 
miss wonderstarr
12:48 / 26.04.04
Kovacs-
Without wishing to appear flippant or confrontational, every single person who has entered strip fight has already put more effort in than you have - Think you can do better? Prove it and enter the next strip fight challenge -


I appreciate that you're not trying to be confrontational, but I don't think this argument holds water. If we take your view, then none of us is entitled to criticise any film, novel or painting unless we've achieved something equivalent ourselves.

Me: "Tarantino's latest is lazy."

You: "In completing a movie at all, Tarantino has shown way more effort and talent than you."

Me: "I think Martin Amis loses it halfway through his most recent novel."

You: "Did you publish a novel last year? No? Well, Yellow Dog is a significant improvement on your published fictional output in 03."

By extension, nobody could criticise any work of art if they couldn't draw well themselves, and so on.

Your argument is only really remotely justifiable, in my opinion, if we're treating this specific strip jam as a different case, almost a charity case. Like, "be nice to these guys because they have day jobs and they've done this for no pay, and we kind of know one of them."

By opting not to take this "well done for trying, everyone who enters is a WINNER" attitude, I am arguably treating the contributors with more respect, because I'm judging them on a more professional, objective level.


I accept my comment was a little brief and offhand. Here's more of what I meant.

If I were to enter this strip fight -- I am more a writer than an artist, but I can draw to an average-amateur standard I suppose -- I would try to put in something I felt I'd done to my best ability. I wouldn't submit work for public approval if I felt I'd tailed off halfway through and not really finished it off adequately. I wouldn't see the point, if I'd decided to do the job, of doing it halfheartedly.

Dalton Sharp's piece has absolutely no plot, character, direction, gag or purpose besides the concept of a crab-claw. Maybe if you know Jenny Everywhere this has more cool connotations, but to my mind this strip goes nowhere at all. It's hardly worth even submitting these three frames -- the dialogue is clearly some kind of sub-samurai routine, though who knows if it's meant to be parody or homage. The final frame seems to entirely drop off in quality, as the art becomes much more rushed -- lines overlapping where one object should be behind another, the characters becoming last-minute-of-lunch-hour scribble.

If I knew Dalton Sharp, I don't doubt I'd be kinder to this strip, but as s/he obviously has cartooning talent, I don't see the purpose in submitting something so very rough in the execution and devoid of any ideas in the writing.

I hope this explains better what I was thinking.
 
 
moriarty
16:05 / 26.04.04
Though your comments weren't directed at me, kovacs, I would like to point out that at least part of the exercise that is Strip Fight is in critiquing the work of the participants, as seen in their forums. I'm glad to see you expand on your views, even though I completely disagree with you (and everyone else, apparently) on the lobster-claw Jenny.

I liked that the artist didn't try to cram a complete story into one page. Most non-sequiter comics put me off, but in this case there was more than enough implied backstory to keep me interested. And I have to say that I thought the artist did a fine job suggesting form through minimalist linework. The wrinkles in Jenny's sleeves, the accurate proportions of her body, the way the lines of her robe doesn't quite connect at the bottom creating a greater sense of movement. And the overlapping linework on the last panel was my favourite bit, creating a tension in their confrontation by presenting something that is technically wrong but still visually appealing and striking. But I'm a big fan of John Porcellino, so what do I know?

I hope this discussion hasn't scared away anyone new to this thread. PLEASE VOTE!
 
 
miss wonderstarr
16:13 / 26.04.04
Fair enough, I should have given more justification for my views and there is room for disagreement, of course. I would contribute to those fora but I'm afraid Barbelith and TMO are already spreading me a little thin these days.
 
 
bitchiekittie
16:36 / 26.04.04
I agree that the lobster claw jenny was fantastic.

I can't vote either way, though, because while I can get onto everything else, apparently the actual voting window is blocked here. damnit.
 
 
grant
17:00 / 26.04.04
Is this thing related to Songfight?

In any of these deals where there's a DIY bent, especially with a time limit (usually a week), I tend to read/listen as if it's a rough draft, not a finished work.

Ex wins with rhyme and lettering, for me, but that Fukushima dude deserves the current first place standing. Almost a story (more of a thoughtful gag), and pretty art.

Pretty.
 
 
Olulabelle
17:08 / 26.04.04
Ex's is lovely. I like the rhyme.

I don't see the purpose in submitting something so very rough in the execution and devoid of any ideas in the writing. I'm with Kovacs on this one, I could never enter something that I had obviously only put a minimal amount of time into, and whilst you can see he/she has drawing ability I just don't see the point of it, it's like entering for enterings sake.

Plus also if I were, for instance, Ex, I would be mildly miffed that whilst I had made the effort, others clearly hadn't.
 
 
sleazenation
18:42 / 26.04.04
Wanting to both keep this on topic and to answer some of the previous points...

Kovacs and Olulabelle - I can see where you are coming from to a certain extent but I think i just don't agree with you. The danger of the position you espouse, as I see it, is that in waiting to hand in only your absolute best work you run the risk of never actually completing anything. As I said in my previous post, one of the aims of this thing is to get people to DO strips. If you haven't done a strip then you haven't met even this minimum requirement.

But yes, in an attempt to keep this thread on track, I really liked Bryan Fukushima's strip - mainly because I got all, or at least some of the jokes and appreciated things like the guest appearence of magicboy. It is a 'comics journal style' jenny in a comics journal style comic strip.

As Aaron Brassea's strip was fun and showed how a strong idea can lead a strip in an unexpected direction - unfortunately I didn't think his Ms Pacman Jenny looked quite jenny enough - the goggles reminded me more of Princess Leia style buns and where was the scarf?

Tony Walsh's Jenny I'd already seen and enjoyed and this prequal to his ratboy crossover just made me want to see another perequal to this page - the ol' star wars problem i guess...

EX's one is very interesting - like the lobsterclaw strip it made me want to see more to see if the Will Eisner esque paneless approach would continue or not. Its also good to see someone apart from Dave Sim to play around with lettering

I am jamie's contribution definitely seemed bereft of ideas, and that does indeed happen when trying to turn around a weekly strip. But the Pope buggering struck me as a bit dull, like someone trying desperately to do something interesting even though they had no idea quite what it should be. It was one of the more technically accoumplished strips.

Mike Steven's strip left me feeling kind of cold - but that's probably because that is exactly the same effect the jenny he is drawing from has on me. She comes across as a dull 1 dimensional cliche, something of an anathema for a multidimensional character...

I have almost nothing to say about Stephen Burrel's strip outside of the comment that Jonny nowhere is a name that demands to be fleshed-out into a character...

I had trouble following Devin Mac Neil's strip. I got the impression that it was all about conception, but the narrative didn't quite hold together for me, the panel to panel transitions were a bit unclear...

As for Alex Bullet's strip - the idea for this was very similar to the world stare out championship final while the form was closer to south park - I could see all the influences, but for me they just didn't quite gell together on a on page strip basis. Look forward to seeing more pages though...
 
 
miss wonderstarr
18:51 / 26.04.04
If you haven't done a strip then you haven't met even this minimum requirement.

However, you have more than met the minimum requirement to comment on these strips. I shouldn't have to repeat my point above. You do not have to have done exactly what someone else has in order to criticise their work.
 
 
sleazenation
19:25 / 26.04.04
Kovacs - But you didn't comment on these strips in your original post – you commented on the quantity of effort their authors had put in, which is I think, as I attempted to outline in my reply to Flowers, a quite different thing.
 
 
Bed Head
19:53 / 26.04.04
gah. I’m going to regret this. But, if you’re going to carry it on, I’ll have to just add I didn’t much like the tone of your first post, Kovacs. Not nearly enough effort, I thought. You’ve gone some way to making up for that with your second post, but now you’re getting all self-important with your ‘right to criticise’ stuff. For a start, I think there is a difference in the terms you can apply when judging a professional piece for which you’ve paid good money, and an amateur piece which may have been done for any number of reasons other than to relieve people of cash. If you don’t think the circumstances in which professional comics are produced is worth considering when you’re criticising them, then you don’t have much sensitivity. In any case, I always try to stick to the general principle of ‘if you can’t find *anything* nice to say, don’t say anything at all’. Now, I’m not always perfect in this, and I think the rule can be bent in the context of a general kickabout; and know I’m kind of breaking my own rule just by making these comments now. I’m aware that your opinion is as valid as anyone else’s and you’re welcome to express it, but it’s not as if we’re all hanging on tenterhooks waiting for you to pronounce judgement, K. I don’t think it’s very constructive when people crash into threads with nothing nice to add. Which is pretty much what you did before you came back and added all the whos and the whys.

And anyway, trying to do something, be it comics or film or novels or painting or whatever, really does give you a better understanding of the process and of the different levels of work that can be involved. Anyone who’s ever done the tiniest job on a film set will have a better understanding of how ‘lazy’ Tarantino is or isn’t being, than some fatbeard with a stack of Empire magazine and the biggest DVD collection in the world
 
 
sleazenation
20:49 / 26.04.04
And just to clarify, I'm not trying to say you have to create a strip (or a film or any other work object for that matter) to be able to to comment on it.
 
 
miss wonderstarr
21:46 / 26.04.04
Kovacs - But you didn't comment on these strips in your original post – you commented on the quantity of effort their authors had put in, which is I think, as I attempted to outline in my reply to Flowers, a quite different thing.

Yes, and to be fair I have said I feel my first post needed work. It did come across as offhand. I think, though, that I've made up for that rather in my second post, when I explained the problems I had with that Dalton Sharp piece. If you wanted me to explain why I didn't care for some of the other strips, I'd do that too.

I maintain that Dalton Sharp did not put in a great deal of EFFORT judging from that contribution. I think s/he could and should have put in more time and energy. I think it came across as rushed and careless. Why isn't that an OK comment? Why is it less acceptable than Moriarty's

And the overlapping linework on the last panel was my favourite bit, creating a tension in their confrontation by presenting something that is technically wrong but still visually appealing and striking.

I don't agree with the above, but I'm not getting het up about that.

I'm really not quite sure why I'm getting this flak when there are others criticising these people's work with no beating about the bush.

I am jamie's contribution definitely seemed bereft of ideas... the Pope buggering struck me as a bit dull, like someone trying desperately to do something interesting even though they had no idea quite what it should be. It was one of the more technically accoumplished strips.

Mike Steven's strip left me feeling kind of cold ... a dull 1 dimensional cliche, something of an anathema for a multidimensional character...


If you accept my apology for the brevity of my initial post, does anyone still have a big problem with my comments about that Dalton Sharp strip?

But, if you’re going to carry it on, I’ll have to just add I didn’t much like the tone of your first post, Kovacs.

Maybe sometime soon we can get over my first post. I'm not "carrying it on" in terms of continuing with the tone and nature of my first post -- I think I provided pretty full and valid reasons why I felt that specific strip was too casual and unfinished.

I don't see why you'd have an issue with that unless you were Dalton Sharp, or were a personal pal of Dalton Sharp. Seriously, what would qualify me to comment, then? If I contributed to the next Strip Fight, could I say what I wanted about the other artists? Maybe if I post on here a bit more I'll get the right to speak my mind?

you’re getting all self-important with your ‘right to criticise’ stuff.

I don't really want to get self-important, but this debate seems to have become quite personalised so it's hard to avoid talking about myself.

I think there is a difference in the terms you can apply when judging a professional piece for which you’ve paid good money, and an amateur piece which may have been done for any number of reasons other than to relieve people of cash. If you don’t think the circumstances in which professional comics are produced is worth considering when you’re criticising them, then you don’t have much sensitivity.

I agree to an extent. If I knew the artists, as some of you may do, I would be much more reluctant to criticise. But as I said, should I be super-charitable about work published online just because someone hasn't been paid for it? I don't get it. It's a competition. How is it insensitive to be critical about someone's submission? Someone's going to win this, presumably, and others are going to lose. In your terms, that's gonna hurt someone's feelings.

Yes, I understand that it's good these people have submitted anything at all. Most of them are more talented artists than me. I admire them to a certain extent just for getting off their butts and drawing a strip. But if you're putting your work in public for people to judge it, how sensitive does the public have to be? Don't most people who produce amateur comics kind of want to be professional?


I always try to stick to the general principle of ‘if you can’t find *anything* nice to say, don’t say anything at all’.

OK, well I think that's ridiculous I'm afraid, in this context of assessing someone's work in the public sphere. You're not just applying this to the work of people you know? You genuinely think that if you can't make a positive comment about a work of art, you shouldn't say anything at all? What would reviews be like if everyone followed that example?


it’s not as if we’re all hanging on tenterhooks waiting for you to pronounce judgement, K.

I don't see where you're coming from. I never once implied everyone was hanging around this thread waiting for my word from above. I came back and filled out my first response out of courtesy, because I was challenged and thought it was a fair challenge.

I don’t think it’s very constructive when people crash into threads with nothing nice to add. Which is pretty much what you did before you came back and added all the whos and the whys.

Thanks for basically ignoring my 14-para 2nd post and fixating on the one line I initially wrote. Yes, my first post was brusque. For cripe's sake, roll on 2005 when you've dealt with that. Was my second post not fair enough, in that it expressed a view and gave reasons for it?

If anyone wants me to bow out of this debate now, I will. I don't want to sabotage this thread. I find it quite an interesting debate but I don't want to be the bad guy.

NB. I PUT "EFFORT" INTO THE ABOVE
 
 
sleazenation
23:01 / 26.04.04
Kovacs - As Moriarty said up post - I realize that not all of that post was directed at me but I wanted to reply to some of it...

I don't want to see you bow out of the debate, nor do I view you as the bad guy. What I thought I was doing was just trying to explain the underlying logic of my criticism of your first post as a means of exploring here we differ in our approach to this stuff.

To put it another way - I wasn't trying to attack you or personalize this debate, and if it came across that way I apologise. I was just attempting to elucidate further on what and why I disagreed with in your post. I meant no ill will. I just think there is an essential difference between effort and quality. Your first post appeared to conflate these two. (this last sentence is possibly the most concise version of what I was trying to communicate If only i'd just come up with it earlier)

Getting beyond that first post yes, I see nothing wrong in criticising Dalton Sharp's strip - I didn't really comment on your criticism of Sharp's strip for that very reason. It's all perfectly valid opinion on a piece of work rather than an attempt to assess the amount of effort a cartoonist has put into his or her work.

But yeah, to re-emphasize, I don't want you to feel bad or like you are copping a load of flak from all sides - its not my intent.

I actually think this has been sort of related to the topic in the sense of how we examine the work of others, (and Kovacs and I might well still disagree on the relationship of effort and attainment etc...). If people think all this has hurt this thread or dragged it too far off topic it does have a twin in the creation which focuses more on the strips them selves- I've already posted my (typo-laden) reviews over there to join the host of other comments...
 
 
Bed Head
03:27 / 27.04.04
Kovacs: I knew I’d regret saying anything. Okay, first, calm the fuck down. I’m not having a go, I’m not trying to start a fight. I’m quite sure that I couldn’t win it if I did. I’m not painting you as a bad guy, I think all we’ve got here is a difference in how you and I choose to criticise things. I’ll go through your post quoting lines like you did with mine, but I think the best we can hope to end up with is to agree to disagree. But maybe you’ll understand where I’m coming from and why I posted. Oh, and I’m not a writer, K, so all these posts take far more “EFFORT” for me than they do for you. I don’t know what that does for how seriously you choose to take my opinion.

If I knew the artists, as some of you may do, I would be much more reluctant to criticise. But as I said, should I be super-charitable about work published online just because someone hasn't been paid for it? I don't get it. It's a competition. How is it insensitive to be critical about someone's submission? Someone's going to win this, presumably, and others are going to lose. In your terms, that's gonna hurt someone's feelings.

Personally, I don’t know any of the artists there. Not Ex, not any of them. Never spoken to Ex online and don’t recognise any of the other names. Although I don’t think I’ll ever be able to forget the name Dalton Sharp, now. Anyway, no need for the implied ‘you versus us’.

And “Super-charitable” doesn’t come into it, do you really see no difference in the criteria you apply to professionally produced and amateur work? And you say “In your terms”: I was trying to use sensitive in the critic-should-be-perceptive-enough-to-take-into-account-the-factors-that-shape-the-creative-process sense of the word. Factors like time spent, motivation for doing it, the rewards gained, whether the intended audience is a paying audience, a fan audience, a captive audience, an indifferent audience. These matter when you settle down with a blank sheet of paper. To even suggest judging all the participants in Strip Fight as if they’re wannabe professionals is uncharacteristically naive of you, and I think maybe it’s a blanket standard you’re applying without actually bothering to consider whether the artists have set other standards for themselves. Which is your right...

You genuinely think that if you can't make a positive comment about a work of art, you shouldn't say anything at all?

You’re rephrasing what I said and possibly changing the meaning slightly. Anyway, to clarify: if I’ve got nasty things to say, then personally, I try to balance that out with a little nice. If there’s nothing nice at all, then no, I don’t usually bother. Can’t see the point, life’s too short, la la la. That’s just me. Ridiculous? If you want.

I came back and filled out my first response out of courtesy, because I was challenged and thought it was a fair challenge.

Challenged how, exactly? You were asked for your vote on the Strip Fight site that was linked to. The vote is the primary feedback the contributing artists are competing for here. You decided off your own back to come back to this thread and write a ‘brusque’ post. Oh, sorry, that’s right, I’m supposed to be getting over that one. Really, I’d get over it a lot sooner if you’d stop firing lines like “roll on 2005 when you've dealt with that” out from behind your “apology for the brevity of my initial post”. Apologise or don’t.

Was my second post not fair enough, in that it expressed a view and gave reasons for it?

Perfectly fair, in those terms. Okay. Here’s what I was trying to do, because I didn’t exactly scale the heights of intelligent criticism in my first post. I voted, then I came back and posted to encourage anyone else to also vote. Saying Ex’s piece is fab is little more than cheerleading, but I really did like it very much, and didn’t feel like drafting out some pompous paragraph on the innovative use of space or whatever. Didn’t seem necessary. I voted and I then I announced my allegiance with a shake of the pom-poms. Others have voted and not, it’s no big deal. This is a thread in Conversation, I just thought it’s to announce, to link, to Yay! and to Woo! and suchlike. I just don’t see the need for a Boo! Hiss! in there. If you want to expand on your reviews there’s a thread down in the Creation forum where the various strips are being discussed. And there’s also a board for just that purpose on the Strip Fight site. So, you want the big difference that I (and I alone, I’m quite harmless and there’s no big anti-Kovacs bandwagon rolling here) see between your second post and Sleaze’s strip by strip review that you quoted from? It’s that Sleaze finds the ones he likes as well as he ones he doesn’t. That’s all. Nice balancing the nasty. And that’s why I boiled both your first post and your 14-paragraph second post down to ‘I don’t like’. When I initially posted about you ‘crashing into threads with nothing nice to add’, I actually deleted a line after that, because I really didn’t want to look like I was down on your second post too. But the fact remains, you bothered to write another 14 paragraphs and yet still had nothing pleasant to say, and that’s what I meant about ‘carrying on’. As if it matters, I’ve got no problem with your opinion on the Dalton Sharp strip, I’m not questioning you on why you don’t like it, I’m glad you’ve come back to give reasons, and I might even agree with you. I’d just far rather you’d told us what you liked, not because it’s compulsory or secret board policy or anything like that, but because it’s a good thing to do. Life’s too short to pull nothing but sour faces.

...Is what I reckon. Like I say, at this point we’ve both expanded and expanded, and perhaps we can happily agree to disagree on this one. Faynites and all that. Anyway, if you scoot around the site you’ll probably turn up some example of me tearing into something without adding any nice qualifiers, thus neatly shooting me down in flames with a minimum of effort. It seems that nearly everyone else in this thread is bending over backwards to point out that they’re not picking on you, and I’m only trying to pick out your posts in order to disagree (whilst remaining as agreeable as possible) with the spirit in which you’ve approached the Strip Fight project.


I think maybe there are interesting wider points bubbling up here about what constitutes ‘valid’ and ‘informed’ criticism. And not just rubbishy trite points like me going ‘let’s all be nice’. When you’ve tried to draw, and really put some effort in to your drawing, you understand other people’s drawing far better; understand better what they’re doing and what they’re trying to do and how successful they’ve been. I am currently the world’s worst ever harmonica player, but since I started trying to learn harmonica, my understanding of what all those guys are doing on the records I enjoy so much has increased a millionfold. Before I was just dancing along, and I could only judge a record on how good it was to dance to and to listen to, and now I can hear cleverness and musical jokes and cheats and brilliance and all sorts of things, even though I can’t actually play like Sonny Boy Williamson. Nothing better for increasing your respect than trying and seeing exactly how far you fall short.
 
 
miss wonderstarr
07:05 / 27.04.04
Good posts above and I see nothing wrong with this kind of debate. I don't know why you're all on about "I'm not a writer," Bedhead, because I found your response entirely stimulating and worthwhile. As for my apology-then-barb, and the boiling bluster in some of my previous post, well, that's just my fighting technique isn't it.

Challenged how, exactly? You were asked for your vote on the Strip Fight site that was linked to. The vote is the primary feedback the contributing artists are competing for here. You decided off your own back to come back to this thread and write a ‘brusque’ post.

By challenged I meant not by the title of the thread or anything, but by the comments following my first post.

Without wishing to appear flippant or confrontational, every single person who has entered strip fight has already put more effort in than you have - Think you can do better? Prove it and enter the next strip fight challenge

And so on. This seems to just be a point you've missed, Bedhead...I meant that I was "challenged" to justify my initial comment.

I take your point that it's harsh to only offer negative criticism without any word about what I found admirable in these strips -- it seems to slam the whole slam and nix the whole concept of this competition. I could offer more mixed-to-positive reviews of other strips on that page, but it seems The Creation or the dedicated forum is the place for that.
 
 
Olulabelle
10:00 / 27.04.04
I don't know why you're all on about "I'm not a writer," Bedhead, because I found your response entirely stimulating and worthwhile.

What he said.
 
 
Regrettable Juvenilia
10:08 / 27.04.04
I'd be quite happy to see Ex's strip, Tony Walsh's, or the dinosaur one win.
 
  
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