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Tamayyurt
00:38 / 05.05.04
Here's some initial concept art for the Thoth Boy animation. Even though these are rough attempts, I'm really loving the direction this is going.



 
 
FinderWolf
17:03 / 05.05.04
These are terrific - nice sketches, carly! My two thoughts are: 1) his hair is a little too triangular in front, and 2) the 'Egyptian skirt' might need to be a little clearer that it's one of those skirt-type things as opposed to something else. Maybe the lines on it could be a little thicker or black (or another solid color).

But, I know these are just very rough sketches you came up with and Imp loves to post fun stuff cause he's excited about the project As an artist myself, I know how it is when you show a totally simple sketch and people might want to critique it, and you're like "I did this in two seconds, not putting much thought into it!" So take my critiques with that grain of salt.
 
 
carly
18:05 / 05.05.04
Not at all, Finder, your input is greatly appreciated! Yes, Alex already mentioned the hair, so I'll be making it look more natural. I hope to have a colored drawing soon. Thanks again
 
 
FinderWolf
20:24 / 05.05.04
I mention the skirt thing just cause I remember reading Bruce Timm talking about how in animation, the more streamlined, visually clear & simple and sleek things are, the better and easier to animate. I know you mentioned you're a Timm animation fan too...
 
 
XXII:X:II = XXX
02:13 / 09.05.04
Imp, howcum when I try to save that mp3 or any other in that directory I keep getting prompted that it's a Quicktime file? Is that you or is that me?

I will add my voice to the chorus of voices wishing to voice your Horus, et al. I actually tried auditioning for the pilot of Evan Dorkin's "Eltingville Club" that was aired on Adult Swim, but I lacked the Staten Island edge to my voice.

Just one thought: Thoth himself is dressed, well, a touch twee. Not that I myself have a problem with that; I'd be a big fat hypocrite if I did. I'm just thinking in terms of market potential. I'd fully expect to see him grinding at a Motherfucker Ball. That may fit the image, but Middle America is not nearly so forgiving. That may be irrelevant; on the other hand, it may not.

VJB2
 
 
Tamayyurt
17:02 / 09.05.04


Hey, Vlad, I don't know about the mp3. You need to ask schmee about it... it works fine for me though.

Thanks for volunteering you voice but Horus isn't a character in the animation (he's in the comic) and I'm not sure we have anymore talking roles. Finderwolf is Thoth Boy, Carly is Anne, and I think the character of Set only yells "Nooooo!" when he's defeated, which Finderwolf could easily do himself. Now if you absolutely want to be a part of this I'll be glad to have you and you can give the best "Nooo!" performance of your life!

And the tweeness was totally intentional. Fuck Middle America!
 
 
FinderWolf
15:40 / 10.05.04
Vladmir, that's awesome! I didn't know you did voice-overs too! We should talk...

Vlad could be in the ext ep. once the show gets picked up and we have a contract for 12 episodes! I ain't kidding -- Thoth Boy's gonna be big!
 
 
Tamayyurt
16:38 / 10.05.04
You just made my day!
 
 
carly
19:24 / 12.05.04
Vlad LOL that comment made my day. I'm from Staten Island myself. The "edge" is mostly a mutation of the Brooklyn accent, since a lot of Brooklynites move here. What other shows have you tried for?
 
 
Tamayyurt
21:43 / 12.05.04
Here's some great flight concepts Carly just sent me. You gotta love that close up of Thoth Boy!

 
 
FinderWolf
12:13 / 13.05.04
Wow, those look really fantastic, Carly!! Excellent stuff!
 
 
carly
12:40 / 14.05.04
thank you, Finder!
 
 
FinderWolf
13:49 / 14.05.04
There's an especially nice sense of movement and motion in the flying sketches above, too...
 
 
carly
19:27 / 15.05.04
Thanks, Finder The flying is what I want to really work on, so any feedback on that is much appreciated
 
 
Tamayyurt
03:19 / 10.06.04
This thread needed a massive bump and what better way than to showcase the first page of Thoth Boy's second mini.

 
 
Tamayyurt
03:24 / 10.06.04
Oh and Carly, as you've noticed from the plot setup on the page, this is some what of a sequel to our animation so any initial Set and Set-bot sketches you have please send JC's way.

I know you're having problems with your comp so if you can't send a pic... maybe a vivid description? I don't know...
 
 
Tamayyurt
13:36 / 22.06.04
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carly
16:45 / 30.06.04
Man I love JC's new stuff...
anyhoo, sorry for the lack of updates, but as for Set, I picture big and black. I want him to resemble the ancient Egyptian drawings and heiroglyphics. As for the bots, my first inclination was crazy-ass anthro-dobermans, but I don't want to rip off the Mummy...
 
 
Tamayyurt
17:38 / 30.06.04
or Stargate... don't they have something similar?

JC has sent me a sketch of his version of Set and I'll send it your way when I get home. You don't have to stick with it since "animation" Set is in the present and JC's Set is in the future.
 
  

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