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Jenny Everywhere in "Graveyard Shift"

Tamayyurt

03:18 / 30.10.03

You're invited to Jenny's first annual Halloween Special! Guest staring Barbelith's own Morrison Moore:

Graveyard Shift

enjoy.

FinderWolf

17:34 / 30.10.03

Very fun, Imp -- nice to see the same artist from the Pan story doing another Jenny! I like her wacked-out hair in this one. And "Morrison Moore" is a great name!

Sax

06:08 / 31.10.03

Yes, a nice slice of Everywhere, boys.

8===>Q: alyn

10:11 / 31.10.03

Aw, harsh! They killed off Morrison Moore!

rizla mission

10:55 / 31.10.03

Well as ever, that was pretty gear. Really cool artwork - especially on the last few pages, and especially especially the mad hair. It's all about the mad hair. And zombies, necrophilia, fighting, cuss words - that's what we like to see!

My only gripes would be that the computer-done lettering leaves something to be desired (and why are the !'s upside down?), and I reckon it would look better with gutters between the panels. But those are minor gripes.

Tamayyurt

12:31 / 31.10.03

Qalyn- I'm sure Mr. Morrison Moore exists in other universes even though he can't shift between them.

Riz- And I have no idea why the exclamation points are upside down? I'll have to ask Andres although I think it may be his computer. I am glad to see that the art is greatly improved from the last strip (and it was completed faster).

Incidentally, this story was originally called "The Late Shift" until sleaze beat me to it. I think I like graveyard better... it gives it that cheesy 50's horror movie vide I was going for.

Our Lady of The Two Towers

14:44 / 31.10.03

Good clean fun, but I thought the ending was a bit weak, sort of running up against that 8 page limit somewhat.

8===>Q: alyn

18:37 / 31.10.03

Well, there's always Alagrant Moorison.

I actually didn't like it till the end. But then, I like shaggy dog jokes.

Persephone

19:08 / 31.10.03

I took the stripey blood at the end as a tribute to the website design

I loved that sweet old man holding onto Morrison Moore's face like a mask...

12:26 / 01.11.03

I thought it was pretty good (though I wonder what that Swan guy was saying on page 5, all those magic words). Necrophiliac tales are always fun (and its always good to see a 2012 reference), as was noted above. That Morrison guy had a pretty cool moustache. The ending did seem a bit abrupt though...

Still, I preferred your last one, but that's probably because it had Pan and sex changes and guy-on-guy kissing (well, kind of), and what not. So, you know, I'm biased.

Not Here Still

15:28 / 01.11.03

Good story, but full of dead people...

Like the Wicker man reference - did Morrison Moore know his boss had been burnt alive a while back?

Tamayyurt

16:12 / 01.11.03

NMA- I think this story takes place just before that.

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