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Smax #2 Kicks Ass!

 
 
Bastard Shit Man
00:47 / 20.09.03

That Morningbright monster totally creeped me out. I haven’t come across a villain this impressive in ages.

And that whole Oprah sequence with Jeff’s childhood reminiscences? Dear God.

This story is as good as LOEG now, as far as I’m concerned.

Except for the art.

Jesus, imagine if this series had a non-mediocre artist assigned to it. Someone like…P Craig Russell? Imagine the beauty and the cuteness of his stuff working up against the horrors of the story, in a totally appropriate way.

Oh, blah.
 
 
uncle retrospective
05:36 / 20.09.03
Issue 2 and this is already the best thing out at the moment.
As BSM cays Morningbirght was real creepy. And it had Billy the Fish too.
 
 
Yotsuba & Benjamin!
12:24 / 20.09.03
How incredible said episode, yes! Even so, that elf rendering roustabout is fucking incredibly eerie. Devestatingly maniacal evil.

Whew! Those things are fucking hard!

But seriously. I get the willies from those kinds of mutation type things, so that freaked me the fuck out, for real. I do love how Smax was this sort of lovably aloof guy all through Top Ten and now you there's this huge level of unfathomable horror to his character. I'm really looking forward to Morningstar daying painfully, and hopefully getting his head chopped off SO I NEVER HAVE TO LOOK AT THOSE EYES AGAIN!

Brrr.
 
 
The Falcon
02:35 / 21.09.03
Morningbright looks like a big fat kitten.

I think Zander Cannon is a more'n passable storyteller, but not awfy flash.
 
 
FinderWolf
00:31 / 22.09.03
I love this series so much! A lot less 'easter eggs in this one but I didn't care, this one was all about heavy story stuff and Jeff's dark past. The design for Morningbright *(which sounds a lot like Lucifer Morningstar/Lightbringer to me, esp. if it was one of the first things God created)* is terrific - looks like some terrible (in the awe-inspiring, mighty and ominous sense of the word) Hindu god.

I dig Zander's art for this series - yes, it's cartoony and not flashy but I think it's a perfect fit for this book. Moore must have thought so, too, since he can have his pick of anyone to draw his stories.

So Morningbright knew Robyn would come to town....what if Morningbright can't be killed because it's one of God's first creations?

Anyone know if the knight on the fly in the first page is speaking in code or something? I bet the final line is "Up!" to his fly steed, but I'm stumped on the rest, and maybe I'm even wrong about that since it doesn't seem like it's English in funny rune letters, unless I'm missing something shamefully obvious.

I love "Ush the cradle, Ush the scythe" -- is there a real concept of God called "Ush" that anyone knows about or did Moore make this name up entirely?
 
 
Eroom Nala
06:30 / 22.09.03
See Jess Nevins annotations where he answers about the first page but he obviously needs a lot of help with this one. He missed the Harry Potter Godric Gryfindor sword on the front cover.
http://www.geocities.com/jessnevins/smax2.html
 
 
Gary Lactus
07:56 / 22.09.03
Morningbright reminds me of one of Jim Woodring's Frank erm... things. All wrong and disturbing.
 
 
DaveBCooper
07:53 / 24.09.03
Love the way that in ... what, one page ?... we see Smax return to the queen, be exiled, and go to Neopolis.
"Decompressed storytelling" would have spun that out over a couple of issues, I suspect.
And I continue to be impressed by the unintrusive way the characters and the setup are re-introduced each issue. People go on and on about Alan's plotting, his characterisation and the like, but I think the almost invisible way he explains stuff just in case you are a new reader or whatever is constantly impressive, and tends to get overlooked (because it's done so skilfully, I guess).
I don't have any problem with the art in this book - not as detailed as Top 10, sure, but then again I think that suits the story more - the hmmphing tree wouldn't necessarily have worked as well had it been in a more detailed style, I feel.
 
 
Spaniel
09:09 / 24.09.03
Does detailed=good?

Personally I love Zander's story-book art style. Simple, elegant and strange enough to be intersting.
 
 
FinderWolf
12:39 / 24.09.03
Should we help Jess Nevins out with this issue's annotations? By the way, I'm not sure if the comic really shows the guy from the video game, but it's called "Dragon's Lair," Jess. I say this with all love. Plus, some of the things he lists "I don't know what this is a reference to" may not be references at all, just typical storybook fairytale type elements.

You could say the harrumphing tree is like the talking trees in The Wizard of Oz or like the Ents in LOTR, or just say 'talking trees with faces are a staple of fantasy and storybook fairy tale literature.'

I think I'm going to go through this issue again very carefully and see if I can help Jess out with some stuff...
 
 
Gary Lactus
15:54 / 26.09.03
Who's cussing the cannon?!?? Shut it. I love Al's Lloigor-esque take on dragons. Superb. Morningbright and that fucking ogre have to be the scariest things in the mainstream for aaaaaages.

And yes. Woodring. Couldn't put my finger on it, so thanks bloke whose suit I'm wearing.

Truly am I married to yr old Mum. The faverit.
 
 
Aertho
16:58 / 26.09.03
Morningbright's scary, all right. And I doubt he's less than what he says he is. I figure he's a mystically minded Dr. Manhattan, or otherwise fifth dimensional.

He knows Robyn and Smax are going to set him free or something, so he does what he has to. I wonder why Naruli's handprint would give Jeff forceblast powers. Something abou the acrostic has me thinking it's more than JUST an acrostic too. It makes too much sense in the context of the characters and the story.

Heed earthly lass, lest our rustic orb become your nemesis.

It sounds to me like Morningbright is addressing Robyn directly in the quote... and saying a variant on a classic Moore theme. "Listen to the world around you, believe and behave as if it is trying to communicate with you, or you will begin to percieve it as you enemy, as if the world itself is something you can run from, or defeat in some way."

Now though Morningbright is talking to Robyn, he's also talking about Smax, who has shame and regret and a defeatist attitude about the world of his origins. Smax needs to integrate his whole life, filth and glory, into something good... and recognize that the world isn't the enemy - that there ARE no enemies in the world, only different perspectives on an enormous scale.

I think the only way they're going to defeat Morningbright is for Robyn to listen to him and ask him directly why he felt it was necessary to take "virgin"s. Naruli said something strange about going back to the center of Morningbright's cave before Morningbright killed her. Naruli may have been educated by Morningbright as to his true nature... and knew that running from him isn't the way out. I'm running hard on few clues... feel free to bat these thoughts around.
 
 
Just Add Water
04:09 / 01.10.03
The knight on the first page seems to be speaking in Angerthas (Tolkien stuff). It doesn't make a whole lot of sense, though (except "up", which he does say).

Second panel: dh hy r-j, dh hy r-j...
Third panel: t i(y) m t ö go
Fourth panel: up!

Well, it flew over MY head.
 
 
Spaniel
08:57 / 01.10.03
t i(y) m t ö go

Time to go.
 
 
Just Add Water
14:32 / 01.10.03
Ah, of course. That could be it.

But then I'm not a native speaker (neither of Angerthas nor of English...)

The fact that "time to" was written in one word confused me. I thought it might be a name.

I'm wondering if the second panel could be an approximation of "there, there...", or is that far fetched?
 
 
Spaniel
16:07 / 01.10.03
It could be a name. As I'm not familiar with the story referred to, I can't be sure.
 
  
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