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I agree with Flux - kill the "dot dot dot" (I don't think it needs any punctuation), and for me personally, I'd say get rid of the text on the back (the "and up and down and left, etc."). Even if you knew Jenny, it's too busy and confusing. If you really want text on the back, maybe start up with a new idea from scratch? How about "Trans-dimensional no fear" to play off the old 'no fear' concept? Naww, even after I suggest it I don't like it - it doesn't roll of the tongue. Maybe some kind of play on some corporate slogan though like Nike's "just do it". Or something else cool. There's a good idea in there somewhere waiting to come out.
How about "The Shifter Takes Over in 2003"? Something using her 'shifter' name would be cool. "Shifting gears in 2003?" "Shifting into your world in 2003"?
But I love the Jenny EveryWear idea, name and logo!!! Nice work! this is pretty awesome. |
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