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			i bet this is a real liberty n all that, but i just posted some of the stuff i write on the Creation topic, and i'd really like some feedback. most of the sites i frequent just get people who go "ooh yes its odd but i like it" so i'd want some honest feedback. not bothered if ya slate it. won't stop me doing my thing but some constructive criticism would be well appreciated. 
 
oh, and i know the spelling n grammar is off. thing is i write when i'm fucked up mostly, and i don't really wanna lose the moment-type-thing of how it comes out. 
 
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