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I've Gotten A Bit Better At The Whole "Comics" Thing....

 
 
Yotsuba & Benjamin!
02:09 / 07.03.03


Here's my latest page (24). It's the first of the final section of the prologue which will hopefully be collected into a first issue this summer. Those of you who checked out my stuff way back on the Whip Your Sequential Art Dick Out thread a while back may have noticed some subtle improvements.

And an unhealthy devotion to the works of Soul Coughing and their frontman Mike Doughty. It all comes to a head most blatantly with the introduction of this, our final protagonist.

The previous 23 pages can be read here and new installments can always be found every Tuesday and Friday.

Please enjoy. If you like it, feel free to keep reading it. Ask David. He fucking loves it.
 
 
Tamayyurt
22:52 / 08.03.03
It looks great and there is an obvious improvement (I say obvious cause I have no artistic eye and even I notice it.) Is that Ghandi (Clone High) in the 5th panel?
 
 
Yotsuba & Benjamin!
01:34 / 10.03.03
You bet your ass it is, dog! Thanks for cold checkin' it!

G-Spot. Out.
 
 
lentil
16:15 / 10.03.03
wow. that's a lot of progress in a short time. First thing that sticks out is the use of colour - the splashes of yellow over a more limited background palette looks a lot more considered than the early pages. the whole package seems improved though really - character design and rendering are livelier, and I doubt your earlier pages could have carried a fairly complex arrangement as clearly as you do here.
 
 
Yotsuba & Benjamin!
17:31 / 10.03.03
Thanks for checking it out, MC and for your commentary. I think it's really the benefits of just slugging it out day by day, and also the fact that I've been dreaming of these stories for over a decade. The coloring style of chosen in particular has made it really easy to progress without getting mired in too much technical bullshit. My greatest hurdles have been fine tuning Kirby's old school look and having to meticulously mark out the borders of anything transparent (you'll see more of it on p. 25) Each page is turning out better than the last one (although 24 is going to be tough to beat). We'll see tomorrow when 25 drops. All I know is that I am loving this shit, even if my hits rarely break 10 or 15 a day. I think it's just cool that a couple of people I've never seen in my life are checking GC out. This summer's first issue (thanks to a generous tax refund, thank you America!) will most likely have to be in black and white, greyscale so a lot of the subtlety of 24 in particular will be lost (I'm particularly happy with the way the lighting of the stage and the lighting of the audience is distinctly and noticeably seperate). Hopefully the story and the art will stand on its own. Unless I win the lottery, the price of putting out a color comic is too far beyond even my well-refunded means.

Once I get a few issues out, though, I'm going to apply for a Xeric grant for a color collection. Until then, a polite pointing to the website and a reminder that it's there twice a week for free and in full color will hopefully be enough.

Anyway, you and IL have been supporting me from the beginning so you know GC #1 will be in your mailboxes signed and sketched for free. Don't even sweat that.

Keep reading, guys. I vow to try my hardest not to disappoint.
 
  
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